//------------------------------// // The Best Crossover // Story: Equestrian Fanfiction // by Lise //------------------------------// @AwesomePony: That's it! I'm kicking you out of the site! I don't care if you're LyraHands' long lost sister, I refuse to deal with your abominable writing! Usually when somepony rewrites something it's better. Well you are the one exception to the rule. Looking at your latest attempts I can only DREAM of the quality of the first chapter you sent me! Seriously, how do you manage? "Your're" ?! Most usually settle for mixing up your and you're, but not you've transcended to a whole new level where the rules of grammar and logic no longer apply! Remember when I said you should go back to school? Don't! For the sake of everything sacred don't subject anypony else to the horror that is you! I'm truly astonished you managed to survive so long! Certainly not by writing anything! Jade @Jade: So, umm, I must add less stuff? AwesomePony I give up! I'm going to the common room to listen my stupid classmates discuss mares. Even that would be a much more enlightened conversation! Jade Okay, it's been 30 minutes. Somepony say something? MightyDragon @MightyDragon: Well how do you react to that? It's borderline MC related, Jade is on a rampage, and I can't even comment since I haven't read the story/chapter in question. PaintDrop @PaintDrop: Don't worry, Jade is just upset because he loves the story. (And he'll be mad when he reads this, I'm sure.) I read through it as well. The idea is really good. If you can force yourself to see through the weird logic and writing issues I definitely want to read more of it. @AwesomePony: If you want ask somepony to be your editor? Just not Jade (or my sister will kill you. She already thinks you're flirting way too much with him.) Short&Hoofy @Short&Hoofy: I know I'm just that awesome. And sure, I guess I could let somepony provide some input. Not that I need it or anything. And DarkSparkle is still a bit upset with em over my Daring Do fanfic (which was totally awesome, by the way! She just couldn't grasp the advanced basics lot aerodynamics to make out the puzzles!) AwesomePony @AwesomePony: you're hilarious! So glad I got you to join this site! Oh, and what happened to "Midnight Castle is lame!"? Just so everyone here knows, she's already got the entire Chronicles collection and a reprint of the original stories. She keeps them right next to her Daring Do collection! Feather @Feather: I never said it was lame! And that's so not true! They are on the shelf under my Daring Do collection! Huge difference! AwesomePony @AwesomePony: I'll be your editor, if you want? I'm good at logic and grammar and spelling. And I love reading! :) Twist Can somepony tell me what the story is about? I know it's a MC DD crossover, but I've read a dozen similar ones. What makes that own so special to get Jade react in such a way? (For reference the last pony Jade hated so much ended up being his bride :D) PrinceEric @Short&Hoofy, @PrinceEric: Ha ha! :/ Really funny. So maybe I'm a bit protective of Jade, but with all that flirting who can blame me?! It's become a daily thing! AwesomePony says how awesome she is, then gets into an argument with Jade. Now I know the difference between flames and flirting and this is not flames. :/ As for the story itself, it's good. Also I think Jade exaggerates about the errors. It's not that badly written. That doesn't mean I like you or anything, AwesomePony! Just that I don't see a reason for the story to be rejected all the time. Maybe An editor can help. MixaMax Ten story is about Daring Do and Danny in a foreign world. The really clever part is that it takes from both stories but at the same time doesn't. (Okay time to go into some world building explanations:)) Daring Do takes place in Equestria, right? So we have everything we're familiar with on Equestria plus a few exotic elements (things that take place on the edges of the explored world). Everhere takes place on a human world. We have humans, magic, weird technology, and a definite lack of ponies. (Even in Everhere it's mentioned they are an exceedingly rare occurrence.) What AwesomePony has done is transport them to a world where humans and ponies live side by side. And I'm not talking a HiE or a PoG! Evening is built in such a way that the two races complement each other. Every piece of technology is designed to be operated by magic hooves and hands. Gearworks, combined with weather magic, are prevalent giving rise things as lightning bolt mechanical carriages made of thousands of human made gears, houses are built to accommodate humans and ponies (often in the same room), and the food industry is developed in such a way so as to have protein rich plants so that humans and ponies could eat the same dishes (mean and flowers still exist). But it doesn't end there! (Oh, no!) The corporations, Ahuizotl, and chosen of the deities (think evil Bellucio) have access to this world via secret portals! Oh and they all are after powerful artifacts (especially the everstone amulet). That aside it's just a badly executed action packed adventure story. ;) LightSparkle Woooooooow! :D Want! :))) PrinceEric @AwesomePony: Me and SweetStuff also want to be your editors! ForceFeedback @AwesomePony: I can take a stab at that. YouKnowWho What the hay?!? @YouKnowWho: since when do you edit? @SweetStuff, @ForceFeedback: I didn't even know you two were interested in that? PaintDrop @ForceFeedback: What?!? No I don't! SweetStuff @AwesomePony: How does it feel to be a star? ;) LightSparkle Err, sure. :D I'll just post an a-link and you can all edit on it there. Okay? That's okay, right? AwesomePony @SweetStuff: Just say yes and we get to read it. ;P ForceFeedback @AwesomePony: It's unorthodox, but not against the rules. However, I strongly suggest doing it via PM. I don't want to add a new rule because of this. The TechNightling Awesome! ForceFeedback Sweet! AwesomePony I've always known I'd be an editor! It's my calling! MightyDragon