//------------------------------// // Daring Do Midnight Crossover // Story: Equestrian Fanfiction // by Lise //------------------------------// @AwesomePony: I'll try to say this lightly. You're a mess at writing! I'm not even sure how you managed to graduate school! (Connections or athletic program I bet.) Grammar isn't an ancient gryphon city! Learn more about it. I'm not even going to get into your "style"... it's just that painful :/ There are high school fillies here who write ten times better, hay even middle school colts write better! (They copy a lot, but at least they are consistent in their copying!) Why am I so mad about that? Because your tragic execution ruins one of the best ideas if seen on the aethernet. There are a lot do great ideas out there, but you actually managed to make a Daring Do Midnight Castle crossover that actually works (grammar and style excluded). Please, go take some writing lessons (like primary school lessons)! I'll pay if you don't have the moment. It's just painful reading what you write! Now that's out of the way @MasterOfThisAstra, @PaintDrop: how are you two holding up? Sorry I couldn't be there for you longer. I've spoken with the Dean and he's fine for you to take some time off until things have calmed down. Also I'm here if there's anything I always here, you know. Jade Aww, my little winged crystal is being mean to somepony who couldn't write. How adorable :P It almost seems surreal. Are you having an affair? :P MixaMax @MixaMax: As if! He's not nearly as cool to bewitch somepony like me! Like, he'd have to be a hundred years cooler before he could think of thinking of asking me out! @Jade: And I know what grammar is! I've done lots of tests! Let me tell you I asked the Wonderbolts entrance test, so ha! Beat that! Only reason I added the mistakes was to see if you are the big shot curator you think you are! Guess you passed that one. Barely. And just so you know, I have enough money! And not because of my allowance! I work two jobs and also go treasure hunting all the time! You really think the idea is cool? I mean I know it's cool, but it's good to see there somepony else to see things as they are! I AwesomePony "AwesomePony" will love to continue this conversation... if she wasn't busy with tech things she was supposed to be doing! AwesomePony Oooh, Dark caught someone doing what they shouldn't have :P Jade's right, though. Good idea, terrible execution. On the other hand, that beats good execution bad idea (at last in my book) so keep ate it, AP! ;) LightSparkle @AwesomePony, @Jade: As if! He's not nearly as cool to bewitch somepony like me! to bewitch somepony like me! Snrk! Nope, no bewitching going on here. I must say that Jade is a doll in real life, though, so I understand completely :P YouKnowWho Ain't that cute? Just to let everypony know—you lay one hoof on my Jade and I break it in two! MixaMax @MixaMax: Idiot! The way you've written it it's like you'll break me in two. Way to ruin your credibility. Oh wait, you don't have any. @DarkSparkle: Please don't give AwesomePony any writing advice. I love you and all, but it'll only make her more confused at this point. :) @AwesomePony: Yes, the overall idea is very good. Most of the time I come across humanized Daring Do stories, or a human lost with Daring Do. You actually came up with the idea of Daring Do and Danny bumping into each other while searching for artifacts. The evergems definitely would be something Daring Do would know about in her line of work, so well done there! Also, I'm actually impressed that it's adventure based and not just another shipping story. (The first two chapters still need to be rewritten from scratch.) Jade Well, nice to know that things are as lively as ever here. ;) Sorry for the scare, girls :( I really didn't want to worry you. I was just a bit upset about some things in my life and did something stupid (as if any of you haven't, but that's a different matter). I never suspected how good friends I had. To be honest, for a while I though ponies only came to me when they needed help from me. I was wrong, so very wrong. You are like a family to me. (And yes, bro, I know you, mom, and dad are probably reading this. :P) I can imagine what it must have been for you looking for me. I can only say I think I've learned a few things about life and myself and don't expect this to happen again. *hugs* @Short&Hoofy, @RRBB: I heard and I'm sorry, but I'm also glad. Just remember things aren't always what they seem. (I know that first hoof now.) Always looking forward to your visits. @CEOWitch: I'm really sorry for what I did. I really was worth it for me (no regrets) but I never considered what mess I might cause :( I hope we still can be friends? PaintDrop @PaintDrop: I'm not reading one bit! Neither are mom and dad. In fact they aren't reading so much that they are totally not crying right now. And mom just bonked me on the head. (Thanks, sis :/) Just be well, scoops. And nice try with CEO, but you really don't know anything about stallions. @Jade: No worries. Thanks, buddy, I have this :) You task care. (And yes, AwesomePony's writing is an abomination.) MasterOfThisAstra @PaintDrop: filly, you don't have to worry one bit. CEO is too much of a chicken to admit it, but he's glad to get some attention, but it's just... well you're a smart one. Good thing you understand it. And of course he'll continue being hired friend. It will take him some time to get over it, though, as sensitive as he is. Lesson number one about stallions: they are extremely sensitive creatures, so we must always suffer and take care of them ;) (Ask my CO ;P) Main thing is that you are okay. Work with that. Fleetfoot I'm really bad at expressing emotions, but... I'm so glad you're okay, Paint! I know I only talk about stories and MCE, but that's because that's what I find to be my escape (I've depression, apart from my other issues :(( ) I like AwesomePony' story a lot! And it's faithful to both franchises! I've no idea how you pulled it off, but you're awesome, Awesome :D. Just one thing I don't understand: how are they both so calm? I mean sure, Danny has seen ponies and it's likely Daring Do could have seen humans, but they are transported to a totally new world (for both of them) and they just go "hey, you're after the gem too?" It's a bit... well... unnatural? Anyway, I must run. (Supposed to be doing homework.) Take care, everybody! PrinceEric @PrinceEric: you're fine ;) And thank you. I know you're her in spirit. PaintDrop AwesomePony still *yay* big time, though! :P Feather