Equestrian Fanfiction

by Lise


Disappointed Master PMs

Hooftoy, sorry about this, but I need to go for a few days. Maybe even a week :( I'd have liked to spend the time with you, I really do, but... :~(

Brush

I know... saving Equestria again. I know that's what you do, but I was hoping you'd have some time for us. How dangerous will it be?

MasterOfThisAstra

I know, hooftoy, I know...:( *tight winghug*

Not dangerous. Is just me and Dark, actually. Imagine the odds. Guess half the time we'll be talking about you and Everhere.

Brush

It's the other half that has me worried. :( I can't stop thinking about you, sweet wings. Your voice, your laugh, the smell of your mane. You are the sun that brightens my day, and yet I feel us drifting apart. Even when I finish my studies in half an year will that change anything? You'll still be off every other week dealing with one crisis or another and I'll be alone worrying.

MasterOfThisAstra

It's not something I can just quit :( You know that.

Brush

I know, I know. I just wish things would be easier. Look at Jade and Max. They've know each other for a month and they're already engaged. Jade goes to see her every weekend. He's not even hiding it. We, on the other hoof...you won't let me tell my parents.

MasterOfThisAstra

It's not that I have anything against you telling, I just think we should keep it easy for a while. I promise we will. Really. I just can't concentrate on that right now. I'll be leaving in half an hour. We'll be going all the way to Trottingham. We'll talk more when I get back.

Brush

You always say that :( Just, please be safe.

MasterOfThisAstra

Hooftoy... you're so sweet, you know? Nothing bad will happen to me. Promise. You know, I'm thinking of passing by your dorm once I finish this :) It's on the way back, and you could use the cheering up. ;)

Brush

Im sure you will. I just hope I don't have to wait that long.

MasterOfThisAstra

So impatient :P

Did you write that new school fic? It's style is sort of familiar, but I can't place it. It would be terribly sweet if you did. It's so simple, but dripping with emotions. Also, writing style is superb.

Brush

Sadly, no. I liked it, and it's quite well written. Somepony knew their grammar, at least. I'd say it might be RRBB. She has the technical skills, but I still don't think she could pull it off. I know it's not you or Jade. Simile writes in an entirely different fashion. I think it's somepony new.

MasterOfThisAstra

I can't see RRBB writing that. We've talked a lot and she's good in her area, but her descriptions are still her weakness, and this story has a lot of them. Do you think it could be the Sparkles?

Brush

No. Dark's writing is unmistakable. Her latest attempt is interesting, but... let's say she's much better at reviewing and editing. Light, I doubt it. She doesn't seem terribly interested in writing, although she does it well. Sometimes she'd write funny snippets in the curator forum.

Honestly, I don't think any of the regulars write in that fashion.

MasterOfThisAstra

Do you think it can be your sister? She's familiar with the subject matter. What if this is her outlet?

Brush

Possibly, I suppose, but I'm not sure she has the time with all her drawing. She's doing a commission per week now on top of making art for her favourite authors (that includes you). I doubt she could write something of the sort. Besides, it isn't like her to not brag about it.

MasterOfThisAstra

We've been getting a lot of mystery writers lately. Simile, EndlessHearts, even Jade. I'm starting to feel left out :P It's not like I can keep up with their speed. Still, I chip in every now and again when time allows (less since I started being with you *ear nibble*)

Brush

Sure, blame it on me :). Honestly, I have no idea who it might be. They are a fan of the series, that's for sure. The style is interesting. It's youthful, yet not naive. That makes me think it's somepony who knows what she's talking about. Unsure if it's a mare. I'd say no, but I've been wrong before. The technical skill is impressive. There are just a few errors, but mostly due to rushing. If I had to guess it could also be InItForTheShipping.

Simile is a different case altogether. They can captivate an audience, but seem out of touch when it comes to character emotions. Almost as if they've never felt love before. I've spoken to them a few times and they admitted having writing problems in that area. As far as I know they travel a lot (no idea if it's work or family related). It's impressive how well they can describe humans, though.

MasterOfThisAstra

Yeah. That's something I'm envious of. I've used a lot of my knowledge of minotaurs to get my humans remotely believable. Wait! Do you think it's Candle? Could it be? She's improved loads since Tech took her under his wing. If it turns out to be her I'll scream!

Brush

She's improved a lot, but it's not her. I also know it's none of the mods. Mighty tried to submit something... it was bad. It was so bad that RRBB spent a whole day talking with Code about it. Mighty seemed to take it well, though. Told us to brace ourselves for his next masterpiece. RRBB said she'll be waiting.

MasterOfThisAstra

Lol. RRBB can be vicious. I still love her, though :)

Brush

Says the mare that she and my sister idolize. :P

MasterOfThisAstra

Dark is here. I must go. :( *thousands of smooches* *ear nibble*

Brush

Be back soon. Love you.

MasterOfThisAstra