Equestrian Fanfiction

by Lise


The Song

Umm, well, I made a song. It's not very good, but I really wanted to share with you. Some have actually heard it and think it's good, so I posted it under stories. I know it isn't exactly a story, but... I really, really wanted to share it! It's the first full song I've recorded and it's based on Midnight Castle, so... *innocent smile*

It's posted under the story "Midnight Shadow" (I've tagged it as a romance story with the sad tag). The lyrics are there too!

Tell me what you think. (Really, really, really hope you like it.)

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: love your voice! :) And the way you sing is so full of emotion! Can I play it to my class? (Promise I won't tell I know you if you don't want me to... although I'd really like to brag about it :D

Also, love that it's about Eric!!! :)

PrinceEric

@SweetStuff: marry me! :D

DannyFan

DannyFan, keep acting that way you'll get banned. Please, don't make me warn you again.

The TechNightling

@The TechNightling: so harsh today... did something happen, Tech?

@SweetStuff: that's actually not bad. Who On my way! You had skills? Think you can do a reading of some of my stories? I won't be mad if you feel inspired and add a few words as well ;)

RRBB

@RRBB: really? :D Love your Danny saga! (I started reading it soon.) Will be difficult to do Danny with my voice, but if you're okay with a younger version, I'll go for it. :D

@PrinceEric, @DannyFan: thanks, you're both so sweet! :D

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: you have a beautiful voice, but you need a bit more practice. If you want, PM me and I can give you some pointers? :)

The song, on the other hoof is... it's... I cried all over my keyboard! I know a few pones have said it's incredible, but it really is. There's slight word clutter in two places, but that could be fixed. If you take care of that, train your voice a bit more, and add music, I think it'll shine!

P.S. please do a happy romantic song next? ;)

Brush

@SweetStuff: way to become popular! And you deserve it every bit! Can't wait to hear your Danny impression... and more songs :D Oh, and before I forget, I'm kidnapping you to my place tomorrow! No way I won't take part in recording this! I'll also ask a few friends if they can join in (who knew my musical scholarship would come in handy? :P)

LyraHands

LyraHands: can you get Octavia Harmony?! :) I'm such a huge fan!

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop: I could, and I will! ;)

@LyraHands: and you won't be kidnapping anypony! I'll be snatching you both! I'll arrange for the recording. :)

Luna

On second thought, maybe you can have a recording session in the royal conservatory. :) Might be less problematic.

Luna

I can get DJ Pon3!

TheRealLuna

@SweetStuff: that's actually sweet! :) You just need to pause a bit more between lines, like you do during the chorus. My sister will love this. :D

Going to the lyrics. Yep, you've got it! With a few months more practice I bet you can become a pony idol! :))

MixaMax

@MixaMax: I never knew you were an expert in singing as well. Please, enlighten us, what myriad of talents do you possess?

Sweet just did something remarkable, that on most places would be considered a ticket to a scholarship, but no! Somepony had to be an eternal critic. :/

Jade the Evervirgin

Cool it you two. No ear nibbling in public! :P

Brush

@Brush: I'd rather have my mane torn off hair by hair, than have anything to do with that harpy!

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: cool it a bit, will you? I've no idea where this animosity came from, but that's enough.

MightyDragon

@MightyDragon: And who exactly made you king Sombra?

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: I did.

CodeFilly

@Jade the Evervirgin: I know you're a cutie, but cool it a bit, will you? Instead of yelling at ponies, write a magnificent story that will make half the site (Max included) drool their spit out.

Brush

@Brush: Well... okay. Yeah, sorry. I can be like that at times. Guess, I have a bit of a temper, huh? It's just ponies like MixaMax drive me crazy! :( Never done a thing in their lives, yet they never miss an opportunity to correct others. Half my class is like that! Arrogant, snobbish jerks, who think they are so much better just because they go to a good college (often only thanks to their financial backing.)

I'll try to keep my temper under check, but... oh well. And I definitely write something to have Max eat her heart out! Let me see her then!

@SweetStuff: if you're still in school (guess based on your voice), I see you becoming famous in a few years. Just don't let loudmouths like MixaMax discourage you. :)

Jade the Evervirgin

@Jade the Evervirgin: Listen, cupcake. If taking cheap shots at me turns you on, go right ahead. You think I'll quit because some aethernet warrior said something bad about me? If you're so brave why don't you come to the meetup? Last I heard there were direct trains from the Empire to Canterlot.

MixaMax

@Jade the Evervirgin: thank you <3 Everypony here has been very nice to me :)
I hope nothing bad happened to you during the magic storm. My sister said it was very scary and a number of ponies got hurt :(

If you write a story, I promise I'll narrate it :)

SweetStuff

@SweetStuff: what do you say about us working on a common project? I've started working on a comic based on MCE. If you voice it, we can post it on the aethernet and link it up here.

@LyraHands: some rules about that might be nice. Comics and songs aren't exactly fics, but are still part of Midnight Castle. What is a Nightling to do in these circumstances?

PaintDrop

@PaintDrop, @SweetStuff: of course, dears. Go ahead. That's what the site is for :) I'll add a few new tags. ;)

CodeFilly