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// Chapter 1: A Broken Promise 
// Story: Discord and Spike's Fight for Love 
// by jennibug11 
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	"Are you ready Shy?" Big Mac asked. They were leaving to go to Canterlot for the weekend, and she knew full well what he was planing. She didn't really want to go, but...
"Okay, Lets go." They walked out of the cottage, bags in tow. She didn't know why she was putting herself through this. Fluttershy knew she had to tell him before they got on the train, but how?
"Hey, um, Mac? Um, can we stop for a minute? I need to tell--- I need to tell you something."
"Whats on your mind Shy?"
"Um, I- I-, I don't know how to tell you this, but, um, i kinda donreallywanna..." Her voice faded off.
"Shy? Come on, you know you can tell me."
"I don't want to..   be your... fiance yet. i know what you are planing, and i do like you, but i am not ready for this yet." at this point she was in tears. "i'm sorry!" she ran off back to her cottage, and closed the door. A minute or two later, Big Mac walked in. He walked over to her on the couch and wrapped a hoof around her. They sat there for a little bit, before she looked up and was going to say something, until his lips crashed into hers. 
She hated it when he did this. he would kiss her for a little bit, then back away and expect to get whatever he wanted. He pulled away and gave her a hug. 
"Come on Shy, please? For me?"
She didn't know what to do. She thought she loved him, but she didn't feel ready for this.
"I guess so," she caved.
They walked silently to the train station, and got on the train to Canterlot. She leaned against him in the seat, but wasn't happy. She thought about it the whole ride there. She liked him, or at least used to, but ever since he told her he didn't want her to be talking to discord, something shifted.  She didn't want to hurt his feelings. the train stopped, and they silently got out. she was trying to decide what to do, when Mac said "Lets go to the room first to drop off our bags." 
They went up the hotel elevator to a large room with only one bed. This scared her. She had never lain in the same bed as Mac, let alone slept with him. She had Mac promise never to sleep with her until they were married. She want sure how far he would have go with this.
She turned around to put down her bags, and there he was. On his knee. Fluttershy gasped.
"Fluttershy, i have loved the way you look since i first layed eyes on you." The rest was a jumble of words to Fluttershy. 'The way i look?' She thought, next thing she knew, "Will you do the great honor of becoming my wife?"
Next thing Fluttershy knew, he was putting the ring on her hoof. When did she say yes? Did she say yes?
He stood up and kissed her. Hard.  She pulled away, but he just pulled her back, and kissed her more ferociously. She was so shocked. he never was rough with her. He pushed her onto her back on the bed and pinned her there. He started kissing her neck.
She started squirming, but he only held tighter. "Mac, please." she said, pleading. She didn't like this. He was being too rough. 
"Mac, please, stop!" That only made him kiss more ferociously. Then he kissed even lower.
"Mac, Stop, now! I don't like thi-"
He kissed her on the lips again, and she turned her head, but he turned it back. He stopped for a moment just to change positions, then did something he had promised her he wouldn't. At least until they were married.
Then she started screaming and writhing, doing anything to get away. She kicked him in that place, and finally he backed off. 
"GET AWAY FROM ME!" She tore the ring off her hoof and threw it at him. "I DON"T EVER WANT TO SEE YOU ANYWHERE NEAR ME AGAIN!," she screamed as loud as she could. he stared at her as if she were crazy, then she stood up, and left.