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It always saddens me when I find old chapters like this with no comment to them. I mean the rest of the chapters had loads of comments, what have this one done the readers since they feel like it should be left all on it's alonesome? I know that it is from a new point of view and all that, but that is what makes this story so interresting, that it works with all of the tools in the literary toolbox, giving us so many angles to study the plot from!
Da-dum-TISH!
So Mailed Fish... Why do I want to make a character called that now? Some redneck griffin that goes around fishing with dynamite, not giving a care in the world about any political situation, so long as they can fish in piece, their every waken moment being focused on catching "the one!"
So the chapter is over, and this is the first chapter of any FoE story that have ever left me with a bad taste in my mouth, and the biggest wish ever to jump to this acts end to see that sweet sweet foreshadowing happening! While it was a very very grim way of introducing the new factions that we will encounter must I say that it was damn effective, gosh darn effective, and I wish more people would dedicate chapters to go "behind the scene" like this, showing the setting from a new angle. I have actually thought about making a few writing projects for the FoE groups with exactly that theme, to write a little chapter centering about a sidecharacter and their angle, and this chapter just made me want to run such a project even more.
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"“Bess, the landlord’s daughter, plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black mane.” " Linebreak