His name is Free, and he was a slave. But when he found his opening and escaped his owners, he finds that the wasteland holds its own horrors. Will he remain uncorrupted? Or will the wasteland wittle away all that he holds dear until he breaks?
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A great half chapter, so Bucket's gone, for reasons made obvious. But uh, is Whips the stallion in the side chapter? from what I've read, it sounds like he's the same pony, But I'm not completely sure if he is. Onto the next part of the chapter then!
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I'm really sorry! I could've swore I responded to this.
Yes, Bucket is gone, though the exact story behind that has yet to be told.
However, Whips is NOT the stallion from the side-chapter. Whips is the stallion from the prologue who captured Free and showed the trio around The Dig.
The stallion in the side-chapter has yet to make themselves known. Though there are clues in the side-chapter. Feel free to PM me with guesses, but try not to post them here so as not to spoil things.
Hey there loved the story do you know when the next chapter will be done
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Hello! I'm glad you liked my story so far!
Chapter 2 is in progress, I'm waiting for my editor to free up some time to look over what I currently have written. Its about 2/3rds done.
7541558 well I'm not much but if you need some one to bat idea's round with PM me happy to help
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I might just do that.
I'll just need some time to think things over.
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Hey there! Thanks for the read and the comment!
I'm glad you enjoyed my story so far.
I am rapidly approaching the end of Chapter 2, so keep your eyes peeled for more.
Its nice to finally see one that get what good slavery is all about! Its nice seeing Whips treating the slaves as living beings, make them last longer.
So a single roll to all of the slaves... Nah you make different rolls for different people! Not behaving, you get a state roll. It is enough to keep your body going, but it will taste like the sawdust that properly make up a third of it. Then you have the ordinary rolls, and freshly made ones, gasp could even be fresh! And for the goody good slaves that are doing the best job... Well them do you give a daily ration of ketchup on the side.
Come on people! Its slavery 101, make the slaves want to do a better work on their own. People work harder to get carrots than to flee a stick.
Heh, I can see that you have notes in the end after each update of the chapter, yea you are gonna dedicate some for me from now on, too many years of pre-reading damages even the best of us.
Nitpicks:
"Cold graspers pinched the raw gash closed and a second arm expertly plunged the needle through my hide and began to stitch the wound closed" Close
" trying to ignore the feeling of a needle and thread pushing through my skin repeatedly," delete
"Instinctively, I lowered myself down next to Jerry." something ate the line spacing before this.
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I'm sticking with the game mentality. Slavers in Fallout don't treat their slaves well.