This is the story of Glacier Mane, overstallion of Stable 744. Join him as he journeys across the wastes to battle for security and ultimate superiority. Raider ponies are not the only faction to be feared.
This story's going pretty good. A couple of grammar errors, but none the less, still excellent! I'm excited to see where you take this in the next few chapters!
“So now that we are all smashed and horny,” she said noting that my body was showing signs of both, “Let's start fucking!” It didn't take me too long to agree to this plan.
Before I could respond she wrapped her mouth around my cock.
It took everything I had not to lose my composure right then and there. Her tongue trailed my stallion-hood’s length multiple times.
This story's going pretty good. A couple of grammar errors, but none the less, still excellent! I'm excited to see where you take this in the next few chapters!
7297665 yeah my editor is taking her sweet time lol. You see she is a teacher and now school is out she will have more time to edit
Chapter I has been edited for grammar everyone
7325381 I think I have started reading your story lol. But I will definitely check it out