ouch, a rough note to end on.

Oh awesome I thought this story was dead. Good chapter!

I'm really glad to see that you are still writing this story. This chapter was really nice to read and I enjoy the description of Stable 16.
Will we learn more in the next chapter about the Stable 50 ?

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You sure will!
Glad you're liking it so far!

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Thanks boi
You're one of the main reasons why I began writing this thing fully, so it's good to see I haven't disappointing you as of yet heh

Ayranne has invaded you fallout fic! Hide the Jewish ponies!

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Heh.

Worry not, she's not related to Aryanne in any way or form even though Aryanne is a best

Can't wait to read more keep up the hard work

Nazis: The Sequel

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A monster! :O

Before I read this, I have a few questions.
1: Is there a specifically explicit scene
2: Is there any references to other FoE stories?
3: Will other characters from said stories be introduced?

And if this isn't the part where I'd normally roll my eyes and walk away, I don't know what is.

Call them what you will. They wear gasmasks and suits of armor, they've got superior weapons, their plan centers around enslavement and forced labor in the name of restoring peace, they have a sexy cold-eyed blonde as their leader... Everyone, the nazi ponies have arrived! But they're not my main concern.

Right now I need to focus on things at Stable 16. It was shown at the beginning of the story just how bad things were getting for the Stable, but this is just a whole new level of screwed, and to be honest, it stretches my suspension of disbelief just a bit too far. It would make sense if weeks were passing by between chapters, but zccording to her logs, it's been a little over 7 days since Leaky and the rest of her wave were sent out to scout for a place to settle. In that time we've seen the Stable develop into a state where ponies are dying from radiation poisoning from the reactor! Was that always happening?

If things were deteriorating so quickly you'd think they would have sent out scouts way sooner (And yes I'm aware there was a wave of scouts before Leaky's, my point still stands). How long do they think it takes to find a suitable settlement anyway? Because at this rate they'd all be dead before anypony came back to tell them the good news!

Then there's the Overmare. I can't facepalm hard enough at her. And I want to like her! She let a bunch of homeless foals into the vault and gave them her rations! But later the nazi ponies (yes I'm gonna keep calling them that) come storming in, basically throwing salvation and aid at them, and she acts like they're pissing in her cereal! Why?! It's not implied that she knows who they are or what they'll ask in return, but I can't chalk up her reaction simply to stress.
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*sigh* I want to see where all this is going, so I'm hoping this fic isn't dead. I also hope these rants of mine haven't discouraged you from writing. I'm an overly critical prick someone that wants to see all things live up to their potential, and there is potential here.

See you next chapter (maybe?)
-Erised

Okay so I just came across this and...woah. I'm really impressed. Your writing is really good. The story is really well made and the scene where she ate from the feast at Plumwood was delicious to read. Your writing has some serious potential. You've inspired me to do something similar so keep an eye out maybe XD.

Keep up the amazing work

- See's amazing looking story

- See's that the author hasn't been online in months

Goddamnit I hate cliffhangers!!!

This is a reallly interesting story. I'd love to see more of this.

She's given everything she needed on a silver platter and still manages to fail spectacularly. You've made an anti-sue. A Mary Sue that somehow fucks everything up despite being given overpowered things and unreasonably helpful side characters.

I'm not sure what to even say or if I should be applauding you for it.

I like the addition of the perk activations and stat successes in the story. It's fun to see your bonuses working!

Someone made some fan art for the story. (Not me)

Well I'm intrigued. Just a shame this hasn't updated in forever. It's been sitting in my Fallout Equestria folder forever.

Couple things I look forward to is the eventual birth of Leaky's foal, if that's something you ever have planned. And more scenes with Dog.

Silk Road is my favorite character so far.

Hope you continue this one day. Really started to enjoy Leaky's story, and your little 'skill checks'.

Is the story dead?