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I liked the action in this one, though I hope Nova learns how to shoot fast! The wasteland won't be too forgiving of that.
Creed Brook seems interesting so far, and anticipating to see where he goes from here. Likewise, with every character Nova meets and accompanies, I'm wondering about what's going to happen when they inevitably learn that she's not the Stable Dweller. It'll be a great test of friendship whether or not Creed and the others decide to stick by her side... or not. Makes me excited! My only complaint would be that Creed's explanation of being a Dashite felt kind of forced, like exposition. It seemed a little unnecessary, given that Nova already knew what a Dashite was. I also liked how Buckner and the others in the city aren't immediately enthralled by her being the "Stable Dweller". I think it was a realistic reaction to the Stable Dweller's reputation, since she's done some things but nothing significant in the area.
I'm liking the reputation display that you have going on right now, and I'm interested in how that's going to grow and change chapter by chapter.
I apologize for how long it's taking me to get to reading these, but I am liking it so far.
How long did it take me to return to this story... blame school and work
Anyway, I'm glad to be back as this chapter was a great read with an occasional laugh! I love the irony behind this masquerade and the "similarity" with original Fo:E plot. Still, you're able to insert yor own original touch to it, be it a brewery under siege or a shovel as the main weapon. I'm looking forward to the surprises hidden in the next chapters! Hopefully it won't take me a few month to continue reading...
I do really not know why so many stories have an allergy to jump forward in the story and show us the plot properly. When I saw the relative short length of the chapter were I fearing for a short moment that nothing would be said or done with so few words, but skipping the normal travel time between objectives that so many other writers focus on is just yet another sign that shows that you clearly knows what you are doing.