Wow...

You are using the Hell out of that Dark Tag, and we only just started... Oh, well! Good job on this one, I like the story line, it's very new.

6727886 I'm Glad your loving it!!! Now, just so every pony knows, i'm not desperately attempting to make this a gruesome story, nor am i trying to make any pony uncomfortable, but there will be DARK elements as well as others, i'm trying to reach down into a more deeper fear of the wasteland, how some pony feels or what they really think in such situations of confusion, and fear; and i quote!

"New, fresh, and different. Is what i'm aiming for, with this story. As well as giving it a bigger crowd."

6732384 So far, what has pleased me the most thus far, is that you touched on the PTSD that the Equestrian Soldiers suffered from in the war. Not even the original Fallout Equestria touched on that rather horrible aspect of war.

And don't worry, when writing a FoE story, you can never be too Dark.

6733070 I know! I was always curious at how soldiers were effected by this tragedy, and as you can see... They were sent there to Red Heart Facility to be cured... Only, they weren't all, being kindly taken care of, and Red Hearts child, made an entire mess of things, in the most savage way possible.~