yay, sad but yay. With a close, you can move onto new things. Too bad Ficha never developed much of a character, sill forget that hes a zebra. But that's probably my memory acting up again. Well I'll be looking forward to Old Grudges, have fun.

Literally just finished recording! :D It was a wonderful journey. Good work!

I look forward to reading Better Days and Old Grudges in the future when I start my readings back up again. :D

Awesome story, but I have a few questions you said Shadow killed one of them with his last breaths, and then as you go on you say both sisters escape with their Pegasus minions so did one of them die per did they both escape after killing Shadow?

6485963 Each entry into the epilogue should be read as the first word takes place closer to the final battle and the final word is the farthest in the future, with each entry filling in bits of a timeline as it goes along.

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Yeah, each entry on the list starts at the same point in time. It chronicles events of each character from the end of The Long Winter's story, to different points in their futures. So even though it's listed as Shadow and Knight taking each other out after three decades, the section with Iron and Knight begins again from the end of the Long Winter, and ends before Shadow and Knight even fight.

That was a great story I really enjoyed that ending

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

Dannnng son, that was good. I really don't have words for it, I'm completely at a loss, It was just that good.

Darnit. Now I have that happy sad feeling, but that means you captured my emotions entirely, and I have no criticism to give, besides that it was a damn fine story. Written by an excellent author. Congratulations, and thank you so much for this story.

6554054 =D It really makes us happy to see comments like yours! Thank you for reading this story and enjoying it. If you haven't yet, I really urge you to check out the sequel story Better Days to see what happens after all of this. Gamma and I are currently in the process of rebooting my other story Old Grudges as that will be the conclusion to this series we made.

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6988375 =D Ty!

I loved this story, it had a happy but also sad ending (No, Shadow! ) I look forward to reading Better Days now though! Anyways, thank you for writing such an amazing story for everyone to read, it's been fun.

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Just wanted to drop you a note and say that I am enjoying the story so far (albeit I'm only through chapter 5). I read Merchants of Hope and saw this was the sequel and got excited!

I'm definitely gonna finish this one!

FP

Man, I hope that Storm stops beating herself up over everything...

Still going strong and still keeping my interest!

I finally finished the story.

All I can really say is that it is a really good story. The action ramped up nicely at the end and nothing felt forced or convoluted. I was a little upset finding out the fate of some of the characters in the Epilogue, but that just means I grew attached to them.

I have a few other stories to catch up on, but I plan on reading Wildfire once I clear some of my backlog, and then Old Grudges once I read Better Days

Thanks for a great read

7455112 Hey, sorry for taking so long to get back to you XD Been really busy. Wildfire really only has one chapter and is on a very long hiatus as, admittedly, I rushed right into it without fleshing out my idea for it.

8085738 It's said that a hydra was used to regrow her leg.

Read it, loved it!
Story:
Fucking amazing job and hope to read more!

Grammar:
Needs a lot of work.

This book is enthralling. I am 39% in at Ch24 and at this point I just can't put it down.

Just finished. What an excellent story. Now on to Better Days.

awesome story i loved to read it very much