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Hah!
Oh. Yikes
Wellp now. Do these messages have date stamps?
Ohey. Date stamps!
Looks like their strings file loading failed, there. That looks about the same as my error messages when the system can't find the translations of coded message strings in the program's language files. Though my fallback system at least puts a space between the code string and the value
On that note, it's peculiar how that last on does have that space, though. It's a bit of an inconsistency. Might wanna fix that
Ah yes. Time to get that truth laid out in front of you in cold, hard numbers.
Welp. That's a bunch. Better get reading!
Hmm. So these guys went for changeling stasis cocoons instead, somehow. This actually makes it likely that the Queen was simply working with them. It would explain how she was there, anyway. Probably because Stable-Tec wasn't too concerned about making a changelings Stable
Let's hope it's local enough that you can get away from it
And, when going into literally completely unknown territory... might be safer to have it.
Please welcome on the stage... the new Death Metal band... SHOWER OF FILTH!
Achievement unlocked: TOOL USE!
Sure. Until you remember the "two hundred years" detail.
So, I'm wondering... You never actually describe how she takes the box along. It'd be far more reasonable for her to use some of the cables from these egg pods to hang it over her back or neck than to levitate it in her magic the whole time.
I'd say you're missing primo looting opportunity, but then again, chances of finding more love there to feed on are probably pretty slim.
If "hooked up" means "closed and possibly occupied", you might want to check them for survivors, because they might just have powered down together with yours then
Woo! Obstacle conquered! Wings ftw!
Oh, wow. What a gigantic shame.
Ah, so normal food does help, then? Alas, being MRE's, I very much doubt they were made with love
Yikes. That means there was violence inside the complex...
Only, it wasn't the Ministry of Morale. It was the equivalent of a Stable Call.
...what?
But... who would... why would either side even bother?
Hmm. So, unless this is an inaccuracy, that places it after Littlepip royally screws over the Enclave?
And a little more irradiated, no doubt...
Achievement unlocked: BACKPACK!
How thoughtful of you to specify
I dunno. That's not all that horrible; do remember that ponies kept sapient cows.
She's gonna get shot. So calling it.
Well, unless you bump into some sane bicentennial ghoul, or if you happened to meet Spike two centuries ago, you're probably safe
Yeeah... that'll go well. You don't even have the basic world facts to build a backstory on, lass
Sunshine... and rainbows. And very suspicious towards anything coming from the sky. I think we have a time frame!
Well, at least you didn't change into a pegasus
Remarks and corrections:
> Why else would she still be laying here
> but I couldn’t just leave them, laying there, abandoned.
"lying", on both.
> I would have gladly laid down and slept
"lain down". (Have a lovely little guide!)
> I drug the husk over to join the others
I'm fairly sure the past tense of "to drag" is "dragged"
> I had been flying
Missing a period at the end.
> After a couple minute’s rest
Should be "After a couple [minutes'] rest"
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That was actually intentional, as kind of a joke to anyone familiar with coding. "CoolBugz" just quickly hacked together some code, so it would output the (very basic) name and values... he just forgot to add a space in there when formatting the output string. I'd originally intended for them to be different, where he remembered to add the space in the main line when he'd forgotten for the others, but I suppose it'll probably work better without that. Changed.
Ah. I hadn't thought it important to mention, but since she mentiones avoiding the use of magic when possible, she's carrying around it in her mouth. I slipped in a casual mention of that, now.
Tastes like indifference and boredom. But yes, normal food helps. Or more, they need regular food as well (That gets a minor mention in-story, though not until the beginning of chapter 3).
Shhhh. They could be alive. Maybe in some other facility. Just... not here. For reasons. But they could still be alive!
Reasons.
What, you've never heard of cows with guns?
(Oh god why do I remember these things? )
Damnit English! Every time I think I've finally got things figured out, I end up tripping over something else. And participles can just go themselves!
Aaand then there's this stuff. Yeah, you're right. Dragged is the correct way. Drug is an uncommon variant used in some areas, and I hear it a fair bit, but I'd rather use the more common version.
(Hah! I even replied to the right chapter this time! Haha! )
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Good for you!
Ohgods, what did I just watch
Love... Love never changes...
Another changeling fic from you, aww yeah!
Our written Ephema and the Cutelings.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Just your friendly neighborhood changeling!
Likely inspired by the opening to Fallout 4. Or the biggest coincidence ever but that's unlikely.
Good story so far, I think I'm gonna like this. Mostly because I haven't found a Fallout Equestria fic I didn't like yet.
Could be worse, you could have gone up to them as a Pegasus. I get the feeling that would have been a very bad idea.
6607965 One of the few long quote comments I actually like! As for Stabletech, they probably tried to make a vault for mentally enslaving changelings, then having it fail because they forgot the diet.
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I always comment like that.
(Apparently some people even started following my example on it, citing it as "hailing from Nyerguds' School of Commenting" )
Heh, mentally enslaved changelings... I actually wrote a one-shot about something rather similar to that
So glad some else has decided to do a FOE changeling edition. I read one a whileback wasn't great and author decided to cancel it a little after starting so the best of luck to this one.
If only it would ever be possible to do something useful with terminals. One would expect that with Overseer rights, it could at least be possible to do math, store text, and query systems data. Getting the flashing word Error is so not enough. But that's why it's called just terminal...
Right at the start, you make something funny!
A mare on a mission...or at least I think it's a mare.
I mostly think of changelings as dudes unless they are a queen.
Speaking of, if it is a she, then can't she rebuild her race via gestation?
Hey! You never know when you may need aN emergency euthanasia!
I can't help but mentally picture that smile as mild disturbing and raider-ish. Just as well, I find it humorous how the changeling keeps imaging wildlife or energy races to be a cause for them to carry guns.
There is a saying "we don't distrust each other because they are armed.
they are armed because we distrust each other."
A nice little juxtaposition between "they" and "us" with a little distrust peppered in the middle.
I'm gonna laugh when she tries walking up to them all causal like and receive a common Wasteland greeting.
Ueah, m8. You're pretty much fucked.
Welcome to the Wasteland!
where radiation levels are ever rising, and every pony has a personality as colorful as their vocabilary!
I have played fallout 3, but have not read the Fallout Equestria fic that this apparently shares continuity with. Do I have enough information to get by? Will most of my setting questions be answered in this fic or do I need to read the original?
This is actually a good spinoff with a more or less original concept, good job.
Welp, I do not know why I haven't given this story a try just yet, I am pretty sure that I have seen it featured on the front page at some point, and I promoted you myself to helper because of your many thoughtful comments in the FoE group, so there are clearly a good head on your shoulder. I do not know why, but for some reason have I always been more likely to pick up newly started stories, or those about the 100K mark instead of completed ones, I guess that I feel that with the many stories out there that my comments are more useful and worthwile when they can help a story along instead of being coming when it is over... Ahem, none the less, lets get this comment properly going!
So just a few segments in and one of the most facinating aspects of FoE that a lot of side stories copy from the original, the beloved first person protagonist telling their story, is peaking its head inside. From how our main character have to specify if a word is meant to be upper case or lower case is the story clearly being told to us in person instead of being written down, and even if it is weird, am I looking forward to in which way that the main character is able to/why they choose to, tell their story to us. Only time and half a million words will tell!
Its annoy me to no end when fan-fic writers make better atmosphere in their fics than Bethesda makes in their games, I would have loved to see something like the daily reports tick up on a screen, that "ohhh shit" feeling slowly growing in my stomach as the hundreds turned to thousands turning to tens of thousands, but alas no such atmosphere was found in Fallout 4 which was a shame.
Nitpicks:
"I lay there in the room as I focused on the quiet," I hate lay/laid, and it could just be me, but it seems wrong to my eyes.
"I’m not sure how long I simply lay there in that shallow puddle of fluids." Okay, I am totally sure that lay is wrong here.
Spotted another error when reading my dead tree version:
> I didn’t want to look. I wanted to lay there
Should be "I wanted to [lie] there"
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Ffffff I thought I'd finally gotten all of those
I still don't know why that one mistake plagues me so often.
Gotta love how close the events in the Fallout: Equestria side stories seems to mesh together in places without it truly feeling too out-of-place.
Where Blackjack had tuned into her radio a few days after leaving Stable 99 and hearing about the events of Littlepip, Calamity, and Velvet Remedy destroying the slaver town of Old Appleoosa in Chapters 7 and 8 during Project Horizon's chapter 7. Or here in Chapter 1; where we can assume that the S.P.P. Tower that had just crashed into the C.L.T. building and awoke Whisper was probably the very same tower that Homage had destroyed using her Star Blaster sometime after Ditzy Doo performed the Sonic Rainboom over New Appleoosa in Chapter 40.
This Sub-Fandoms minute attention to detail is both very scary and amazing at the same time.
Took me a couple of seconds to realize what "noling" meant, that wss smooth by the way