I finish Horizons and then this gets featured? Fate is a stone cold bitch. I almost don't want to read it. Tell me, is there character death and mutilation in this? Cannibals? Magical flesh melty stuff? Mass murder? Are you going to rip out my damn heart killing a character and then river dance on it? I'm not asking because that makes me interested, the changeling bit caught my eye already. I'm just not sure I can take anything like what I mentioned before after I just finished Horizons.
I finish Horizons and then this gets featured? Fate is a stone cold bitch.
yes yes she is
I almost don't want to read it.
Oh this is nothing like Horizons. I am no where near that caliber
Tell me, is there character death and mutilation in this? Cannibals? Magical flesh melty stuff? Mass murder?
Its Fallout Equestria.. how can we not have that?
Are you going to rip out my damn heart killing a character and then river dance on it?
Oh now thats an Idea..
I'm not asking because that makes me interested, the changeling bit caught my eye already. I'm just not sure I can take anything like what I mentioned before after I just finished Horizons
If you do read it I hope you enjoy it. I am having fun writing and drawing it. Thing is.. This isnt Horizons, Its my own little creation, so.. I dare you.. join the ride.. and get upset when I don't update fast.
I was going to say Emjay can't possibly survive, but if it was a changeling the existence of venom is debatable.
Honestly, this is one thing after another. Literally every single chapter has had a fight with something. Yes, the wasteland is dangerous, but not to the extent that you can't go a minute without being attacked. I mean, the wasteland has existed for years, at the beginning it may have been this bad, but not now.
With constant conflict there's no respite for the readers or the characters. I literally cannot empathise with anything in this story because there's no down time, it's all fighting and the characters just do not seem to care.
The characters are also making stupid mistakes that mean they should not have survived for any amount of time. I mean, Tidbit is a power armoured ghoul yet the moment he gets shot in the neck he is useless. The bullet would not have severed enough muscles to make his head sag like it was, it would have been slowed by the armour and his ghoul nature would allow him to shrug it off. And here he doesn't even do anything before he is grabbed and his leg is ripped off. The armour would have to break before his leg even came close to ripping off, and bones are stronger than you think.
Emjay is literally useless. She is shown as an agility berserker, which means she should be constantly moving, fast and agile, striking in critical locations to do the most damage, yet all the enemies she's fought now she has been stupid and immobile, letting herself get hit. She has not done any damage because she continuously tries to strike where her blades will not go.
Misty has done nothing ever since Tidbit and Emjay joined the team. She's nothing but a medic despite having experience with firearms. She just stands there and waits for someone to get hurt then proceeds to waste medical supplies healing them. The bandage she used on Hero would not have healed the cracked carapace on her leg by itself, those bandages are for lacerations, small ones, not what amounts to a broken bone.
Hero herself has literally done all the work. Her OP Dive specifically has done all the work. She started out being portrayed as just a changeling, not very bright but smart enough to survive, yet now she has no trouble empathising, talking, and wielding firearms? What gives? At the start she barely talked, could not even shoot a gun and only saw Misty as a source of energy. Yet she quickly comes to call Misty a friend, learns how to skillfully wield guns and now she cares for Emjay?
The hostiles in this story are not exempt from idiocy either. The changeling in this chapter continues to attack Emjay, despite the utterly immobile target that is Hero that was emptying a clip into its head at point blank range. The steel rangers from earlier fail to notice that the group had moved from the building they were firing on despite having EFS that could tell them such. They talk and taunt which is not something they shpuld be doing, being military, and they completely ignore the unknown threat of a changeling flying directly upwards.
Serenity is literally the only one that is portrayed okay. She has reasoning and she's not completely stupid unlike every other character.
Huh, when psychic imprinting goes horribly horribly wrong..
I will be honest: never thought I'd see the day one of these was featured. Congrats, man.
Yay, an update!
6364157 I guess there was some formatting errors
6364198 Thanks heaps, I never thought that I would get featured for anything
6368687 A lot better than my nearly 12 month pause between updates earlier LOL
6369691 plenty of food, but love, eh.... not even in the best of times..
I finish Horizons and then this gets featured?
Fate is a stone cold bitch.
I almost don't want to read it.
Tell me, is there character death and mutilation in this?
Cannibals? Magical flesh melty stuff? Mass murder?
Are you going to rip out my damn heart killing a character and then river dance on it?
I'm not asking because that makes me interested, the changeling bit caught my eye already. I'm just not sure I can take anything like what I mentioned before after I just finished Horizons.
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yes yes she is
Oh this is nothing like Horizons. I am no where near that caliber
Its Fallout Equestria.. how can we not have that?
Oh now thats an Idea..
If you do read it I hope you enjoy it. I am having fun writing and drawing it. Thing is.. This isnt Horizons, Its my own little creation, so.. I dare you.. join the ride.. and get upset when I don't update fast.
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Fair enough.
I was going to say Emjay can't possibly survive, but if it was a changeling the existence of venom is debatable.
Honestly, this is one thing after another. Literally every single chapter has had a fight with something. Yes, the wasteland is dangerous, but not to the extent that you can't go a minute without being attacked. I mean, the wasteland has existed for years, at the beginning it may have been this bad, but not now.
With constant conflict there's no respite for the readers or the characters. I literally cannot empathise with anything in this story because there's no down time, it's all fighting and the characters just do not seem to care.
The characters are also making stupid mistakes that mean they should not have survived for any amount of time. I mean, Tidbit is a power armoured ghoul yet the moment he gets shot in the neck he is useless. The bullet would not have severed enough muscles to make his head sag like it was, it would have been slowed by the armour and his ghoul nature would allow him to shrug it off. And here he doesn't even do anything before he is grabbed and his leg is ripped off. The armour would have to break before his leg even came close to ripping off, and bones are stronger than you think.
Emjay is literally useless. She is shown as an agility berserker, which means she should be constantly moving, fast and agile, striking in critical locations to do the most damage, yet all the enemies she's fought now she has been stupid and immobile, letting herself get hit. She has not done any damage because she continuously tries to strike where her blades will not go.
Misty has done nothing ever since Tidbit and Emjay joined the team. She's nothing but a medic despite having experience with firearms. She just stands there and waits for someone to get hurt then proceeds to waste medical supplies healing them. The bandage she used on Hero would not have healed the cracked carapace on her leg by itself, those bandages are for lacerations, small ones, not what amounts to a broken bone.
Hero herself has literally done all the work. Her OP Dive specifically has done all the work. She started out being portrayed as just a changeling, not very bright but smart enough to survive, yet now she has no trouble empathising, talking, and wielding firearms? What gives? At the start she barely talked, could not even shoot a gun and only saw Misty as a source of energy. Yet she quickly comes to call Misty a friend, learns how to skillfully wield guns and now she cares for Emjay?
The hostiles in this story are not exempt from idiocy either. The changeling in this chapter continues to attack Emjay, despite the utterly immobile target that is Hero that was emptying a clip into its head at point blank range.
The steel rangers from earlier fail to notice that the group had moved from the building they were firing on despite having EFS that could tell them such. They talk and taunt which is not something they shpuld be doing, being military, and they completely ignore the unknown threat of a changeling flying directly upwards.
Serenity is literally the only one that is portrayed okay. She has reasoning and she's not completely stupid unlike every other character.