Ah, not the last of the rangers, not after losing one there to hero's emovore tendencies.. But yeah, rangers are tantamount to armored jackarses (no offense intended to any jacks or arses) It's honestly rare you don't get the technophilic chlorox container in a steel wrapped package. And sympathy for that devil is long gone.
6229858 They are Jerks the jerky ones are anyway... I dont think we will see any of AJs rangers in this story, so any that you see here are jerks and hopefully they get what jerks deserve
By this point in time have I come to overlook the glaring mistakes and just enjoy Hero's adventure and how she goes trough the wasteland as a discipel of Stich, making friends and talking weird doing it... but this...
" but this micro fusion pack will be able to power what parts you have."
If you want to write a Fallout story, write a Fallout story with Fallout items, but if you want to make it in Equestria please try to give your terms some attention and keep from using tech from Fallout and use the magic of Equestria.
... You know scrap that overlooking part, for this chapter did surely jump a quite large amount of sharks. A normal unicorn able to levitate a big stallion, his power armour and his pair of 100lbs miniguns is one thing, but a changeling there are able to defeat 4 Steel Rangers without trouble, and then vampyric life draining powers... It have been fun up to this point, but seeing them getting all of the gear, winning such a big battle, and being such good friends without any real logical reason beside them meeting each other once outbalances Hero's adorableness. I am sorry to say it, but it is sadly the last chapter of this story that I will be reading.
"Tidbit startled a bit as Emjay caught his attention.." Only one period is needed
".Hero, having heard Emjay speak" You need a space in front of this sentence
"“Do you think I have done terrible things,” Serenity asked." Remember your question marks when you ask questions
"They skittered away from the larger caliber rounds of Tidbits 50 caliber guns," Guns are weird so it should be .50 caliber
Ah, not the last of the rangers, not after losing one there to hero's emovore tendencies.. But yeah, rangers are tantamount to armored jackarses (no offense intended to any jacks or arses) It's honestly rare you don't get the technophilic chlorox container in a steel wrapped package. And sympathy for that devil is long gone.
6229858 They are Jerks the jerky ones are anyway... I dont think we will see any of AJs rangers in this story, so any that you see here are jerks and hopefully they get what jerks deserve
That ability of Hero's is OP if it can incapacitate Steel Rangers.
By this point in time have I come to overlook the glaring mistakes and just enjoy Hero's adventure and how she goes trough the wasteland as a discipel of Stich, making friends and talking weird doing it... but this...
If you want to write a Fallout story, write a Fallout story with Fallout items, but if you want to make it in Equestria please try to give your terms some attention and keep from using tech from Fallout and use the magic of Equestria.
... You know scrap that overlooking part, for this chapter did surely jump a quite large amount of sharks. A normal unicorn able to levitate a big stallion, his power armour and his pair of 100lbs miniguns is one thing, but a changeling there are able to defeat 4 Steel Rangers without trouble, and then vampyric life draining powers... It have been fun up to this point, but seeing them getting all of the gear, winning such a big battle, and being such good friends without any real logical reason beside them meeting each other once outbalances Hero's adorableness. I am sorry to say it, but it is sadly the last chapter of this story that I will be reading.
"Tidbit startled a bit as Emjay caught his attention.." Only one period is needed
".Hero, having heard Emjay speak" You need a space in front of this sentence
"“Do you think I have done terrible things,” Serenity asked." Remember your question marks when you ask questions
"They skittered away from the larger caliber rounds of Tidbits 50 caliber guns," Guns are weird so it should be .50 caliber