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good chapter, and I can already see that contract part returning to bight him in the ass. But for now I'm glad that he get's to be with his friends. It was a good setup for the next story ark, so keep at it.
I'm only about half way through.
As a reader, I would have preferred if the omissions were not species here such that it would be a feeling of concern for the unknown than dread of the inevitable. It also means the two given cases won't be a surprise when they happen. Unless it's subverted to something like contracted molestation or forced rebranding of self, or self destruction or defilement that starts off sounding like the given omissions...
Though now I have predicted those cases and anticipate they may occur. But the inevitable still feels as such.
Things will continue to go poorly (in some manner of speaking, his survival and alliances are still somewhat lucky)for him very quickly.
Keeping a running commentary as I read.
Great card.
Well that was a messed up dream. Poor Prancy not even bothered by it a bit just goes to show how much the last few days (weeks? I'm bad with time scales in fics) have been hell to him.
But I thought he had the Educated perk?
Calling it now: she banged Nameless.
I was about to comment about this but then Prancer said it for me.
I like this gryphon more and more. That reminds me that I still have the next chapter of NMS to do >w>
Nooo, but if the teacher gryph steps down, who's going to teach the new fledglings?
No, Prancer, stop and think about-
Prancer, come on!
Come on, you haven't signed yet, you can still change it!
Prancer, you're a fucking idiot.
Prancer, you're an ass.
And just when it couldn't get any worse we get a Meeting of the Assholes.
Mental image of Doctor Clipwing clipping through the floor made me snicker.
Jerk.
Oh my god Prancer, you are being insufferable.
In Catbird We Trust
Having another gryphon on your hip seems like it would be incredibly heavy.
Didn't get the chance to say it before, but Macchiato is so freaking adorable. Too bad for her that she lives in
splay 0-6-sigmathe FoEverse.I see what you did there. Also stop making her more adorable, she's only going to die sadder.
Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)
Hey there,
Just wanted to see if you planned on continuing your story
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I might not, however I do occasionally poke at another chapter from time to time.
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A shame, just picked it up an read to the end...wish there was more...