Ever wake up in morning and for a few short moments you can only remember bits and pieces of your self? Ha, well that of think but expand it to about your whole life, that is what my life is now... Sounds fun right? Ya i don't think so
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Wait a minute, doge are you writing this? This was a rather interesting chapter which lives up to it's own name I only have a few problems with it but not much. The only problem I see here is how it was they kind of just found the notebook , but you bring how snowy should act if finding out she wasn't who she thought she was exceptionally well so that definitely gets you points in my book. That's it for now and before I leave I have one more thing to say, I didn't see any words in the wrong place and almost no spelling mistakes so you did good, and as I always say it seems I can't wait to read the next chapter.
6198452 Well it wasn't really explained well but basicly it was meant to be like Luna found the notebook on the unicorns body, or well the unicorn's bloody mass
6198751 Oh. That explains it rather well actually so uh scratch what I said then. Still thought you have gotten a lot better in just a few chapters so you are doing great and can't wait to see how snowy deals with this information. Anyway can't wait to see the chapter and as always keep up the good work.