(FoE side fic) A look into the life of Prancer Thistledown, a Talon Mercenary initiate. Following his brief rise, and sudden fall before joining the heroes of another adventure
5814927 I suppose we'll have to see where the story goes with his hoof. Also, thanks for all your support throughout the story, I really appreciate it!
All caught up on this chapter. I kinda want to hug the fluffball catbird.
And Prancywancy reinforces an alcohol dependence that will probably save his life at most twice, and get him hurt enough to wonder why he bothers with the living thing many more times than twice.
I was done with it and giving it back. Next to it I laid down Innuendo. I wasn’t sure what I was doing, but in the comics I had read years back, an agent turned in their guns when they quit. Or maybe that was a pony thing, I tried to prepare myself for embarrassment.
This gave me a smile. I imagine because I can relate with this sort of awkward but decided gesture, and yet it's not one of those scenes where everything stops to be like LOOK! AWKWARDNESS! ISN'T THAT FUNNY! It's just kind of a thing that happens.
She looked at me in a way I hadn’t seen before, A particularly happy face that was unlike what she had had before. She looked particularly excited. It kinda bothered me. “Prancer, I never thought you’d be so direct!” She was practically beaming. “Was it some time as a Talon that helped?” Yeah, time as a Talon indeed, a good dose of hell… “Please, may I have my goods, Mina?” “Sure thing, sweety-bird!” She cooed, placing a few cans and bottles into a paper sack.
Cute!
Also it's interesting how he does the "can't trust anyone" but immediately backs out of it with a list that's longer than many people's count of trustworthy family members. But I suppose it's mostly an emotional sort of thing, sorta like suddenly being in power over someone else with the 'gun while he's sleeping.sleepy thing'.
5892077 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, or at least some of the important themes. Anyways, there's more to come! (but, you knew that...)
There's a few other themes I had tried to tie in from earlier chapters here, but someone will bring it up soon, I'm sure! Anyways, more to follow soon!
Was reskimming the chapters looking for a desc for Gavii, as I had been considering commissioning a pic of her. I might not be able to do that though. I dunno. I know she's slender with grey tipped feathers, fairly silly, and has a fairly large and heavy rifle. Which, in turn, reminds me a little bit of Excellen and her Weissy.
Anyway, while I was rereading I stumbled across this quote, that still gave me a bit of a chuckle and a goofy grin:
Gavii rolled off of me with a happy murr. She must have enjoyed flopping on me. What a jerk.
Thank you for enjoying my story. It means a lot to me!
Also, You know what, go ahead and commission that pic if you're still planning on it. I loved your vision of how she looked from your own artwork. After I saw it, I really began seeing her in my own mind like that. So, what I mean is, you've pretty much defined the Canon appearance of Gavii anyway! =3
6124031 Ah, don't fret, the rough draft for chapter seven is nearly finished. Then it will go into a careful revision process... or I just read through and touch things up randomly until I throw it to proofreaders, whichever way you want to call it.
6126501 yay, sooner the better, but take the time you need. Out off all the stuff I read here, your style has a far more deep feeling to it (on par with MN7), witch is why I'm glad that at least you still update.
Love your work hope to see more, also please tell me his leg we'll get redesigned? Gryphons can't work adequately with hooves
good chapter, It's a nice little rest chapter before things get nuts again. I hope to read more if it soon.
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I believe that Hippogriffs would have something to say about that!
5814233 hyppogryfs aren't instinctually set to attack with claws
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I suppose we'll have to see where the story goes with his hoof. Also, thanks for all your support throughout the story, I really appreciate it!
All caught up on this chapter. I kinda want to hug the fluffball catbird.
And Prancywancy reinforces an alcohol dependence that will probably save his life at most twice, and get him hurt enough to wonder why he bothers with the living thing many more times than twice.
This gave me a smile. I imagine because I can relate with this sort of awkward but decided gesture, and yet it's not one of those scenes where everything stops to be like LOOK! AWKWARDNESS! ISN'T THAT FUNNY! It's just kind of a thing that happens.
Cute!
Also it's interesting how he does the "can't trust anyone" but immediately backs out of it with a list that's longer than many people's count of trustworthy family members. But I suppose it's mostly an emotional sort of thing, sorta like suddenly being in power over someone else with the 'gun while he's sleeping.sleepy thing'.
5892077 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, or at least some of the important themes. Anyways, there's more to come! (but, you knew that...)
There's a few other themes I had tried to tie in from earlier chapters here, but someone will bring it up soon, I'm sure! Anyways, more to follow soon!
Was reskimming the chapters looking for a desc for Gavii, as I had been considering commissioning a pic of her. I might not be able to do that though. I dunno. I know she's slender with grey tipped feathers, fairly silly, and has a fairly large and heavy rifle. Which, in turn, reminds me a little bit of Excellen and her Weissy.
Anyway, while I was rereading I stumbled across this quote, that still gave me a bit of a chuckle and a goofy grin:
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Thank you for enjoying my story. It means a lot to me!
Also, You know what, go ahead and commission that pic if you're still planning on it. I loved your vision of how she looked from your own artwork. After I saw it, I really began seeing her in my own mind like that. So, what I mean is, you've pretty much defined the Canon appearance of Gavii anyway! =3
6065096 http://not-fun.tumblr.com/post/121301995315/patreon-rewards-for-kilo-aka-extremely-cute I sure do wonder who that is in the upper corner, looks kinda familiar.
6083449 Are you being coy with me now? ^~^
Very cute! 10 outta 10!
6118952 Yay for cutejoyment. :
wheres the next chapter!? I'm starting to forget about this one, don't leve us hanging.
6124031 Ah, don't fret, the rough draft for chapter seven is nearly finished. Then it will go into a careful revision process... or I just read through and touch things up randomly until I throw it to proofreaders, whichever way you want to call it.
6126501 yay, sooner the better, but take the time you need. Out off all the stuff I read here, your style has a far more deep feeling to it (on par with MN7), witch is why I'm glad that at least you still update.