Welcome to the floating city of Blackwater, were the rum flows like the blood, and the young grow up by spilling it. For young Star Charter, becoming a pirate was the only path in her life to take, but unlike with war, that changed.
Btw some editing you may want to do: new area- era thieves to talk it. -to take it captains pony's - pony captains Well accept - Except together then kill - than they were tiring - trying My tale was the worst off-tail he killed herself to she her -? and thought him - taught hut me real - hurt realy - really their was enough of the books the we didn't need to share - there were enough books that... so to lot let any - dont let Saved a peace- piece I sould build-should that's way they -why Down a flight a flight safe to amuse that - asume me, of it will - or It's were he also controls the city - where that I hade trotted - had the hole back of the city - whole the guard new what I - knew
not even 20 minutes into it's release, and I already have a thumbs down XP
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We feel your pain.
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It's just the haters. Don't worry about it TOO much. *Squishy ghoul hugs*
Y-you mean ... Churning Waters, right? Or is there a pun I'm missing out on here...
5748066 nope, It's Chumming, as in throwing blood, bone, and body parts in the water to attract fish and sharks.
I'm not sure why, but I read the entire chapter with an Irish accent.
Yaaaar quite fine booty!
Btw some editing you may want to do:
new area- era
thieves to talk it. -to take it
captains pony's - pony captains
Well accept - Except
together then kill - than
they were tiring - trying
My tale was the worst off-tail
he killed herself to she her -?
and thought him - taught
hut me real - hurt
realy - really
their was enough of the books the we didn't need to share - there were enough books that...
so to lot let any - dont let
Saved a peace- piece
I sould build-should
that's way they -why
Down a flight a flight
safe to amuse that - asume
me, of it will - or
It's were he also controls the city - where
that I hade trotted - had
the hole back of the city - whole
the guard new what I - knew
Nothing quite like a story that starts with a stabbin