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Finally got around to reading ch38, and good job. Now the story has to move to the inevitabul palace ruins for the final fight with a boss that has at least three forms! I can hear the battle music now,
5690685 Heh, and what'd you think of Storm's little...thing near the end?
5691093 she needs a crown.
5691098 Oh? Why do you say that? (PM me, I try to keep spoilers out of the comments.)
Holy bejeebus that last escape scene had my heart racing! Excellent writing! I really felt the speed and sense of urgency, as well as how agile and badass Shadow is! Congrats, your writing really really captures the mood. I'm loving this story so far!
Feels like you are dragging the story now. This chapter felt like the end, but nope, it continues.
I'll try continuing to read it.
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https://youtu.be/iRlh_w6uRds