• Published 13th Jan 2015
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Fallout: Equestria - Forsaken - Gamma Deekay

The short story of a day in the life of a run-down robotic filly, whose only goal is to find her parents in the ruins of post war Equestria.

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Comments ( 28 )

i like this you've peeked my interest sir :trixieshiftright:

Good job, I was half expected for it to walk into the lost herd from Pink Eyes, that would have been a trip.

Interesting... you have my rather scattered attention.

YaY! Nice! I maybe she should think little more... as AI? Dunno how to make it but she really have too "real pony" way of thoughts :twilightsmile:

Thats so sad :applecry: that actually hit the feels man I just wish this was longer I mean this has so much potenchel sorry cant pell but just saying

:ajsleepy: Beautifully written, but very tragic. I don't knew if I'd be able to handle because of the feels. :applecry:


I take it that you liked it then! :pinkiesad2: Sorry for the feels!

7414266 Yeah, I liked it. Don't be sorry for the feels, it was a great story!:moustache:

Poor wee thing. Been purging her memory for 200 years.
Good god, that was a depressing story.

I loved it!


Yeah, sorry if it was a bit depressing, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

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This is good, good stuff, this is a good thing that you have done. :D


I'm glad you found it enjoyable! :pinkiehappy::heart:


What was it? I'm not sure what you mean?

7961354 guess that did come across as rude ^^'
I meant is there more to the story with an incomplete tag to it

Nvm, mixed imcimplete up with the tradgy tag


It wasn't rude, I was just confused is all! :pinkiehappy: Still, I hope you enjoyed it!

For a tradgy story, was pretty good

This... this is amazing! In such a small text, you have told so deep and touching story. I'm impressed.


I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

Gotta say, I enjoyed this story! Very much enjoyed!! It just made you feel for Amber, the way she was designed everything, still thinking that her parents were still alive when in turn.... quiet the opposite.

Very much would come back and re-read again!!! :raritywink:


I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I do hope you give some of my other stories a shot as well! :pinkiehappy:

Just for information, there are 3 audio versions of this story:

My first encounter with "Forsaken" was though the Forrest's narration. That's why I love his dramatic reading more than others, or may be it's because of heart tearing wails of the little filly...

Late on the bandwagon on this one, but I'll still chime in.
Once I was far enough into the story to see how this was going to play out, I was
honestly angry. Angry that this sweet filly would never be able to live her life, stuck in this endless loop of toil. To have her find her father and yet be unable to recognize the situation for what it was, I'm still unsure if that was a cruel twist of fate, or a gentle cosmic stroke, letting her still believe. The anger gave away to heartbreak, and from there, introspection.

Thanks for the fic!

This was beautifully tragic. I want to hug Amber. :fluttercry:
I love this story! Maybe, some day somepony will find her and try to help her? :unsuresweetie:
cough* sequelplease *cough

Awesome fic! Definitely going in my favorites!

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