• Published 13th Jan 2015
  • 793 Views, 25 Comments

Fallout: Equestria - Forsaken - Gamma Deekay


The short story of a day in the life of a run-down robotic filly, whose only goal is to find her parents in the ruins of post war Equestria.

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Comments ( 25 )

i like this you've peeked my interest sir :trixieshiftright:

Good job, I was half expected for it to walk into the lost herd from Pink Eyes, that would have been a trip.

Interesting... you have my rather scattered attention.

YaY! Nice! I maybe she should think little more... as AI? Dunno how to make it but she really have too "real pony" way of thoughts :twilightsmile:

Thats so sad :applecry: that actually hit the feels man I just wish this was longer I mean this has so much potenchel sorry cant pell but just saying

:ajsleepy: Beautifully written, but very tragic. I don't knew if I'd be able to handle because of the feels. :applecry:

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I take it that you liked it then! :pinkiesad2: Sorry for the feels!

7414266 Yeah, I liked it. Don't be sorry for the feels, it was a great story!:moustache:

Poor wee thing. Been purging her memory for 200 years.
Good god, that was a depressing story.

I loved it!

7471342

Yeah, sorry if it was a bit depressing, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

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This is good, good stuff, this is a good thing that you have done. :D

7955563

I'm glad you found it enjoyable! :pinkiehappy::heart:

7960575

What was it? I'm not sure what you mean?

7961354 guess that did come across as rude ^^'
I meant is there more to the story with an incomplete tag to it

7961354
Nvm, mixed imcimplete up with the tradgy tag

7961569

It wasn't rude, I was just confused is all! :pinkiehappy: Still, I hope you enjoyed it!

7962667
For a tradgy story, was pretty good

This... this is amazing! In such a small text, you have told so deep and touching story. I'm impressed.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

Gotta say, I enjoyed this story! Very much enjoyed!! It just made you feel for Amber, the way she was designed everything, still thinking that her parents were still alive when in turn.... quiet the opposite.

Very much would come back and re-read again!!! :raritywink:

8393563

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I do hope you give some of my other stories a shot as well! :pinkiehappy:

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