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5455873 I see what your saying, I'll se what I can do to clean that um.
As for Candy Pop, I wanted her to be the character that would full force mess with Slowtrot, your opinion of her might improve when she comes back, or not, making characters can be a midfield.
Also, on Slowtrot being kinda whiny, this is true, but this is more to do with his lack of agency, in the story. I'll try to make him less annoying as the story goes on, he just needs to start taking more action on his own.
OIA? Now I'm just plain confused. It's PH all over again! DAMN YOU, PH!
Heh, I like PH.
Careful not to delve too deep, though. When you gaze into the abyss, the abyss also gazes back at you.
Ahem. Anyway, everything seems in order. I'd gladly reference this fic in my own story, if it weren't for the fact that Pendulum Labs tried to be as independent from the rest of the world as possible. Still, if I can, I will. Good luck with the next chapter!
5463885 Thanks, also June is meant to be the Scottish pony in this, but I kindove just let that slide. As for the O.I.A. ya, PH is an awesomely dark pit, of which I'm only going to scratch the surface of.
also if you want me to reference your story in mine, I'll see what I can do, once I'm done with "The Long Winter" I'll catch up with your story. THe R&D Stable has a lot of stuff going on.
oh, and contact me on steam if you have any questions.
So, we finally get down to what's so special about his Pipbuck. I will agree though, having a pipbuck that is designed to be super secure probably makes plugging it into normal terminals a bad idea! But yeah, as Wadapan was saying down below, the mentioning OIA does open up a whole world of options! I only used it a few times as a reference to PH, but I always wanted to use it for more. Anyway, why do I have this feeling that as soon as Slowtrot even starts to feel like this place could be somewhere nice to stay, alarms are going to sound and the whole of equestria is going to go up as judgement day hits? Can't wait to see what comes up next!
5466507 well with the O.I.A. it opens doors, but it can also take over a story with how much twists and turn it can give. but ya, you got an idea of what might happen, it is wartime equestrian, we know that in the end nopony wins, nopony good.
I can take grammar mistakes, happens to the best of us, heck my prosa and gramma stinks to high heaven… But not having capital letters where they are needed… Yea sorry, can't sit trough another chapter like that.
If you ever come around to edit it to a readable state are you more than welcome to message me so I can give it some worthwhile comments instead of just being distracted by all of those lover case letters.
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I'll Keep that in mind, well then I suggest skipping to Chumming Waters, at that point I got someone to help edit for me.
The Office of Inter-ministry Affairs, otherwise known as (or not known as) the O.I.A. ... Oh no
Someone who has read Project horizons which is a feat in itself, LB
sheeeet
Now things are starting to get really interesting.