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Using the title name as an apology for the hiatus.
Nice.
It took me a moment to reacquaint myself with the characters, but I'm excited to hear that this story is coming back. I sorely missed it.
But then...
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Also, I feel that Echo is goddamn stupid. Must have used her Int score as a dump stat...
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Right. Luckily wasn't the word I had meant to type there. Fixed it.
yay, good to see this back in action. Loved the chapter and cant wait for more :)
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Luckily and wasn't, I believe you mean.
Because she still didn't get to them in time.
Yay!!!!!!!!!
Dude. This shit is the tits. Some god-tier storytelling right here.
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Thanks, glad to be updating again.
Hooray for well-intentioned fill(y/ies)!
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This will probably end in a lot of pain and bloodshed and explosions followed by disappointment.
and never discovering the joy of an oAnywho, lotsa discussions and new infos and stuff! And two chars immediately setting wrong first impressions! And stuffs! And tactical espionage filly action! And the return of Borkden! Neat!
At least now we know from Ash's trip that it is canonical that white coats do regularly participate in rave parties.
Well I broke. I was gonna wait for more to be released before I picked it up but it appears I'm to weak for that shit.
I love the story and the characters and I very much enjoy your writing style.
Only two real questions:
I thought Ash got his leg scythed off in the stable? I'm assuming I either read it wrong or he has some sort of prosthetic that Echo wouldn't think to comment on.
How did you manage to make Ziel sound and act like that one cousin we all have?
Also I'd like to point out that you've officially got me on the update train again, I blame/thank you for this. And as always keep up the wonderful work and may the fates smile on you.
She can read, huh? She's a cultured raider filly!
Ahh. Still so damn naive. I, for one, don't really trust Rose. Sure, she helped Echo escape, and almost died in the process... but her actual reasons for that could be quite a bit different from just "because she's her sister". The fact she can read is another interesting factor in that... it probably means she wasn't just some slave.
Language upgrade acquired!
Doesn't mean she can't be mistaken about Ripple
Echo, you stupid naive filly
Whew. Not that naive, at least.
I wonder what's up with these snide comments at the living situation... not as if she had a ton of luxury where she came from, right?
I didn't figure the fake-princess as much of a person to tell stories to random foals. Who's Rose's mother, actually?
And of course she's not doing the sensible thing and taking a few months of zebra martial arts training first
...she adds, to disguise her terminally stupid optimism
Ooh. Chance of Ashred being a big part of this story: Increasing
It's not like it was almost a year or anything. XD Seriously though, glad to see an update.
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Tooooootallly not a "Read it and Weep" gag...img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120211072734/mlp/images/9/95/FANMADE_Rainbow_Dash_playing_with_a_ball.gif
Friends? Aunts? Plans?
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The "ands" thing refers to this:
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If the Towers weren't finished then the Pegasi cant use them to grow food in the clouds right?
Then why they would keep the area cloudy?
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Thanks. Fixed that error.
Is this story going to get an update...?
Is this story dead Snow? I'd like to find out what's up with ripple. And what happened to pandemonium.
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It's on extended hiatus. I want to keep writing it, but it doesn't want to cooperate with me.
7280091 hang in there buddy! I have faith this story will be just as awesome as it's predecessor.
Just finished Guise of Chaos in under a week. Haven't read this so far. I really hope to see it continued as I'm a big fan your work now (: good luck friend
dam why did you quit
Any updates snow? Still trying to start writing again?
My money is that ripple has slipped back into two kick rip. Please let them find him soon he needs to be with his family
Since you're not continuing this story, may I ask what you had planned for the plot? I'd just like to know what happens
I started reading GoC 4 days back, finished it and now we're here. Well, it was fun while it lasted.
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Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
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Yeah, sorry everyone. I don't have any real excuses other than life keeps happening, and I'm just stuck on the story for some reason no matter what I try. It's still on my mind constantly, even three years later.
four years and nothing to show for it, this be dead people.
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Oi, where's the story at?
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Been thinking on this all day and now that I'm home I've decided. Either I'll have the next chapter out before christmas, or I'm calling it quits.
9320378 Well I sure goddamn hope you're not going to. Still waiting for her to find Rip. Goddamn alive, thank you very much
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Good news at least, I got 1500 words down last night. Hopefully I don't fail myself and my readers. I've done enough of that these last few years.
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That's great news actually! Thanks.
And she was never heard from again. RIP.
Very sad that you actually cancelled it. I fell in love with your story and when I saw that you made a sequel it really brightened up my day. Christmas is over and your promise of scrapping it is fulfilled. I hope someday you will rethink and maybe finish it. I understand, that this is exhausting and I am not demanding on anything. Either way, thank you for Two Kick and Ripple's story, I loved it. (@Fallingsnow)
this still such that it never got finished.
Hope they find Ripple.