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No comments on either of the new chapters?
4898541
Patience is a virtue, my friend. Focus on the story, the comments will come in time.
4898541, 4916009 Great chapter, but in your opening quote you have it a bit off
You say "mare" then "his" when it should be "her". Then you say "man" then "Equestria" when that should be "mare".
Apples Together song being good luck for the Rangers? Absolutely brilliant.
I liked the battle and the use of character motivation you used for the Commander. Though now that I think about it, I'm surprised that you went with Shadow Dancer as the fiancé's name; given the time period you could have gone with Radar to fit in with the original Fallout:Equestria .
Not a complaint, just an observation.
Perk should read can go no further. Its a double negative otherwise. You quit as soon as you can or finish if you can't isn't much of a perk!
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Was copied from a PNP perklist =P