" We set up a bonfire just outside Stable 6 and ate some apples and mystery meat." Ehh… I am pretty sure that it wouldn't be a mystery for a raider where the meat comes from, beside is it a really really badly kept secret that every time a fallout game did mystery meat that it is human meat.

"And a few dozen pounds of food and water. Pretty big take."
Ehh not really, that is like maybe a week or so of food and water. A "poud" of food or water is like a days ration, so they are saying that a weeks worth of food is a big take… Since they are eating mystery meat would they get way more food out of eating a single pony, they weigh quite a bit after all... Wait something hit me, why are they trying to hit a new place when they have just cleared a Stable out? Sure they do not have any tech ponies to keep the Stable stable, heh pun intended, but there would still be loads and loads of food and water if they had enough to keep a population of hundreds going. Sure I know that raiders are pretty… well simplistic in their way of thinking, but leaving the perfect base of operation is just stupid.

"You planning on leaving after this last score?" I would say delete this last. With it being there does it state it is the last, while they are still discussing the matter.