Everyone has heard the stories of Fillydelphia, from the Stable Dweller herself down to the lowliest slaves that survived the unspeakable horrors and hardships. Many forget those who weren't slaves or slavers, but they have stories too...
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No griffin skill-picture this time? Disliked, unfaved, reported (is there something else I can do to destroy you).
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Only when he levels up.
Never fear. I'm considering a full illustration for the next chapter, and he'll be leveling up then too at least. Hopefully it won't be more than a month before that's out like it was for this chapter!
This is quite a fresh change of perspective amongst amongst the FoE side-stories. No big bad to stop (as of yet), no immediate threat (as of yet). Just the day-by-day ongoing of a plucky griffin lucky enough to earn instant membership into the Talons for being a griffin, but unlucky enough to have a conscience. And I always liked 'The other spectrum' spin of things in FoE. Because when you think about it, no matter Slaver, raider, or Red Eye's Talon, they all had to have mom's and dad's in their lives.
Kaz is a prime example, having a living sister and father with a relatively adjusted upbringing to boot. But life in the wastes is hard for a griffon who wants to be a doctor whenever a unicorn springs up a medicine related cutie-mark. No wonder why so many griffons become Talons.
This chapter in particular hits a full circle upon Kaz witnessing what Glimmer had just been subjected to, likely planting doubts to report escaped slaves to his superiors.
Actually, I can't imagine how awkward it may be if Kaz had to be one of the Talons who tries to stop Littlepip's escape if the story is set very close to that event.
Anyways, good work so far. You just got a dedicated reviewer.
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Thanks, glad you like it so far!
I'm glad everything seems to be coming across like I'd intended. I haven't read very many FO:E side stories, but I did indeed hope to have a little contrast here with a story that wasn't about saving the world or anything. Just an average guy trying to make it by in a very crappy situation.
As for how things will work out with Little Pip, well, I don't want to spoil things for when I eventually get there (doesn't help that I'm still planning that far down the line), but this story will overlap a little with it eventually, as well as Murky Number Seven (which I highly recommend if you aren't familiar with it).
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Thanks, fixed that typo. Glad you're liking the story so far!
There are hating your job, and then working under Red Eye