When Darkstar struggles free from his cocoon, his hive is nowhere to be found. In a search for answers and a place to belong, he traverses the blasted wasteland of Equestria.
Looks very nice, I would like to read more. Changelings for the win. Have a like and a fav.
Just one tinny tiny thing I would like to see different: You perk. I'm always one to tell people to highlight it, but this is a bit too much. Make only the important things ("Level up!", "New Perk" and the perk's name) bold. Otherwise it would be like reading a text entirely in bold. It would loose its meaning as a highlighting tool.
I really like this story. Awesome idea to make the protagonist a changeling. To bad about Imhani though. But that's what happens when you wake up an ancient evil just to stab it. I can't wait to read the next chapter and read your back story for your changelings name. Keep up the awesome work and fave a like and a fav. too.
This seems very interesting.
Looks very nice, I would like to read more. Changelings for the win.
Have a like and a fav.
Just one tinny tiny thing I would like to see different:
You perk.
I'm always one to tell people to highlight it, but this is a bit too much. Make only the important things ("Level up!", "New Perk" and the perk's name) bold. Otherwise it would be like reading a text entirely in bold. It would loose its meaning as a highlighting tool.
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Thank you for saying so.
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That must be the most delicate feedback I have ever gotten. I have fixed it now, so hopefully people will stop disliking the story.
No really i always wanted to read a Fallout Eqeustria story in the perspective of a changeling since stumbling upon this picture
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My apologies i don't really know how to spoiler it.
so far so good
Just so you know your story was added to the Fallout Equestria Group by G-man64! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!
I really like this story. Awesome idea to make the protagonist a changeling.
To bad about Imhani though. But that's what happens when you wake up an ancient evil just to stab it.
I can't wait to read the next chapter and read your back story for your changelings name.
Keep up the awesome work and fave a like and a fav. too.