It’s the next day, and you feel like you’re on top of the world. Applejack was ecstatic when you came back with Applebloom trailing behind you, naturally. And then Pinkie insisted on throwing a party...
Applebloom is the focus of attention among the young fillies and colts, of course. They crowd around her, asking her over and over to tell them what the boggies looked like, what they talked like, how they smelled and, most of all, what it was like to be rescued. You grin as you catch a bit of her latest tale; each time she tells another story, it seems to get a bit more outlandish and fantastic.
Twilight and the other ponies are all being honored too, of course. Everypony did their part to try and rescue Applebloom, and it wouldn’t do to forget that.
Still, every time you look up at the hastily painted banner that hangs from the rafters you feel a little thrill run down your spine. “THANK YOU CARROT TOP, HEROINE OF PONYVILLE” it reads in great block letters. You’ve attended plenty of celebrations for other ponies, but this is the first time you’ve been singled out for your deeds. Throughout the party, you’ve been approached by friends, neighbors, and even a few complete strangers, all eager to congratulate you for your part in saving Applebloom.
At one point during the party, Twilight leans over to you and asks, “I was going to write a letter to the Princess and tell her all about yesterday. You don’t mind if I mention you by name, do you?”
“There’s no need for that, Twilight Sparkle. I’ve already heard the news.”
“PRINCESS CELESTIA!” you gasp, as you and everypony else in the room fall to their knees at the monarch’s sudden appearance.
“Please everypony, there’s no need to bow.” The Princess makes her way over to where you and Twilight are standing. “Yesterday, I received word that a band of boggies had made camp near Ponyville. But when I got here, I found that the problem had already been solved, thanks to the hard work and quick thinking of Carrot Top here.”
You blush at the complement. “Thank you, my Princess.”
Celestia turns her attention to Twilight. “Now, I believe you had a report you wanted to give me?”
Twilight clears her throat. “Dear Princess Celestia,” she begins, earning a few chuckles. Looking at you and Applejack, she continues, “Today I learned that there are many kinds of friends. Some you hang out with every day, and some you only spend time with occasionally. But a true friend will always help you out when you’re in a bind.”
“And I learned that I’ve got a true friend in Carrot Top, here!” interjects Applejack.
Celestia laughs. “Well, it certainly seems like you’ve learned a lot! I must return to Canterlot now, but you all have my gratitude for taking care of the problem so quickly and effectively.” She turns and locks eyes with you, making you blush. “Especially you, Carrot Top.”
As Celestia leaves, you practically glow with pride; it’s not every day somepony gets a compliment from the Princess herself! All in all, you can’t imagine how things could have gone any better than they did. And now, you’re going to enjoy basking in a little well-earned glory.
The End
Awesome! I think I got the best ending!
Heck yah! Do'n that again!
I win!
I won...my first time through? That never happens in CYOAs, ever.
A couple missteps, but I'm glad I got this ending.
Overall, good story!
I actually won. This is so awesome, I love this story.
Carrot Top
Saver of pownies.
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Yeah! First try! I never win these things!
This took me back--I remember going thru all the CYOA books my local (and school) libraries had. I was a fun trip down memory lane...
Wait, wat?
That was all?
That was short. Interesting, though.
Yay, scored a good end on the first try.
Now, to see all the bad ends...
This is the first CYOA I've won on the first try.
I WIN! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!
Are all the endings more or less the same (good: get party, bad: get enslaved)?
I am quite good with CYOA's so I scored five consecutive good endings before stumbling into a bad sixth ending...
Best ending is as best pony! Who needs a stupid brownie assistant? They'll unionize behind your back and then you'll have to give them milk, cream, AND cookies. And when you give a brownie a cookie ( dessert cannibals)... they're going to want a dental plan. Meanwhile, this ending gets you a party and brownie points ( ) with the friggin' immortal sun goddess princess. Best ending, 'nuff said.
ADDENDUM: Best penultimate step to get this ending: bucking the new leader of the boggie banana republic. Because violence is satisfying, especially when the leader of your peaceful nation commends you for it.
I got this ending first try. I'm not gonna attempt to redo this to get another ending. The Boggies have been taken care of and I was hailed as hero(ine?) of Ponyville by none other than the Princess herself. All due to my left-handedness and my attention to how the other Boggie wanted a battle of wits.
Heyheyhey, riddles, boy I tell ya... riddles are the way to go.
This was delightful! I wish I'd read it years ago, or gotten a physical copy at Bronycon. Thank you for a wonderfully nostalgic experience.