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Oh that really is sad what happened to those ghouls in the forest :fluttercry. So does Star have the mind of an adult or does she have the mind of a child still, does she know what happened? Also I hope Mint doesn't go feral, but at least that filly is safe good chapter
Oh my, this is going to be a long haul, between this and MN7 at 40 and 50k respectively, but dang, this is going to be an update to dine upon over a lovely span.
Nice touch mixing the after-the-fact broadcast in with the caravan arrival to depict the scene.
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The 55k word Murky Number Seven chapter put out a little while back that I assume you're referring to, simply must be read. Now go read it... OR ELSE! (Really, it is one of the story's best chapters, and the longest.)
4025047 Ive heard it is. But ergh, I haven't had the full time, energy, and attention (Big one here) to devote to it. Same for this, Just have to find that perfect spot to sit and enjoy the fun work, especially with the way the previous chapter ended.
I was going to read this last night but the 40k words with no headphones for music was daunting....
I'm really glad I waited, I got all the music from this chapter and it all suited even if I outread it at times. Ah well.
This chapter was awesome. At first, I thought that the ghouls didn't attack him due to the radiation he soaked up, but semi-sentient ferals? That's a new idea, and I like it!
I really, really have to hand it to you, your portrayal of the entire ghoul group was amazing. I like the quirks you gave em' all "No relation to the wonderbolt".
Bronzestar. Damn, just damn. That dude was awesome. I'm kinda sad that Shadow ditched his book. My guess is Minty kept it and is gonna either give it to Shadow or keep it for herself for the memories it holds.
Star is definetely completely sane, at least thats how I'm viewing it. She understands the 160 years have passed and has maintained her sanity. Am impressed. I hope her and Softheart stay friends.
I don't really care for Minty as much as Bronze or Fleethoof, but she seemed an okay character. I just wasn't too interested in her.
Its official. Raiders are clones!
I didn't spot any errors in this chapter, so kudos, to you and your editors/pre-readers.
I am worried for Shadow's eye. Why can he never get nice perks?
I kinda wonder if Bronze was trying to set Shadow up with Fleethoof...
I loved this chapter, blood for the blood god!
Instead of Shadow bringing in Ghouls for reenforcements, I'm instead considering it to be "Shadow summoned a horde of undead from the ash to fight the raiders." It just sounds cooler.
I take it the ghoul that took the lethal axe blow is dead? ...Okay it sounds like a stupid question when I ask it like that, but she was really hangin' on there.
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Yeah, that chapters ending got me killed in Team Fortress 2 by my editors, and at that time I had a couple more so... every time I turned around... blammo... I was dead. As for the Rampage thing, well, I didn't really intend for that to mean anything. I simply liked the idea of hoof claws so much I decided to use them.
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Yeah, nopony ever gets a break in the FoE setting. Not even the ghouls. As for Star, she does know how much time has passed, and she's not the only one! However for the answer to that and if Mint snaps, you'll have to wait till next chapter. Which hopefully won't take me three months to write.
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Thanks, truth be told I've been itching to do that for awhile but I've been worried it might seem to jarring. Glad you liked it!
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Huzzah! The music was well received! Yeah, the music out pacing the story is something I've often worried over, however there's little to be done. Thankfully Bronyken who does the reading of my story can tweak the songs for his audio recording.
Thank you, I spent a good deal of time re writing that entire opening, even after getting to the half way point of the chapter. I just didn't like how dull they all seemed so I started adding in more character to some of them.
As for Bronze, yeah, he was an interesting character to write, and I hate that so many of them I make up end up either dying off or not being seen again for awhile. I'm happy you enjoyed both his and Fleet's personality, thought it sounds like I may have failed with Mint. And you are indeed correct about Star.
Clones... hehe...
No, he wasn't attempting to hook Shadow up, but with that poor pony's luck it's something that would have happened to him! After all, it seems everypony's trying to hook him up. Or just get him laid in Wild's case.
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Shadow summoned Feral Ghouls... it was super effective!!
No, that feral survived the fight. Sadly I wanted to point this out in the chapter but after Shadow kills that last raider I never could find a good place to put it in. And by the time I got finished re writing the aftermath of the battle, I'd completely forgotten about her! I'm planning on addressing this in the next chapter however. Derp.
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Yes indeedy... I do tend to ramble a bit, but it seems to work out. Hope you enjoy the chapter when you get to it!
A harsh end, but so often, it is. And yet, it fits, a BDH moment, and its still barely enough. For all things the end, its a chance for unity as well. A very enjoyable chapter to read.
I <3 this story, so, so much! I loved Bronzestar, and I'm sorry he died- but he understood, at the end, and for that I'm glad, and it was the death he'd have wanted- if probably sooner than he'd have preferred. The music was equally epic, and I am quite a fast reader and regularly outstripped it. And still don't like Dannsonn.
And I have an avatar now.
Loved this chapter! so much feels can't wait for the next chapter
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Glad you enjoyed it! I do try and cram as many feels into my story as possible.
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Nice to see your still with me there. Yeah, I had a lot of fun with Bronze. As for Dannsonn beats, I'm just not crazy about their commenting on who you're listening to at the beginning of every song. I mean, I get why they do it... it just kills the mood.
Perhaps one day I'll be able to afford my own personal soundtrack. About the same time as I sign this for a movie deal I'd guess... so what do you think. Bruce Willis as Shadow, or maybe Morgan Freeman? I could listen to that man talk all day...
4041843 I'm not a fan of their rap style. I feel it ruins what would otherwise be a lovely bit of orchestral piano with stupid noises and words. Some rap I like, just not that.
Morgan Freeman, definitely. And if you get Hugh Jackman in it somehow, I might be able to get Mum to watch, too.
Discord dun look happy.
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Glad you liked it that much, and happy to remind you how awesome the FOE setting is.
Now, if I could just get the next chapter going a bit better.
Is this on hiatus or is this going to be a very long chapter?
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No hiatus, and I don't think its going to be any longer than my normal chapters. The problem has been finding time to sit down and write. Work has kept me pretty tired, I have been working evenings one shift followed by mornings the next. Bit of writers block as well.
The next chapters around 15k words give or take a 1000 words, so I'd say its about half finished.
Dame thats to bloody good