Okay.... Uhm, last I checked, females, mares or otherwise, unless they are hermaphroditic, lack prostates. Otherwise, I liked it. It's kinda cute.

4263338 Females actually have a prostate :P Just google "female prostate" if you'd like to delve a bit more into it. It's however rarely referred to it as a prostate. Because you know, for some reason people almost always either refer incorrectly to anything relating to the female genital, or call it by some pet name, or scientific one. xP
And thanks. Not one of my best works, but thought it could be a fun/neat read.

I have a question about this who is pip in the story is this a side story of the original fallout equestria because I'm kind of confused

Oh and sorry for my grammer fail I hope I did not make you mad...because people get on me because of it.

4312465 Pip as in "LittlePip" (or is it "Little Pip"?) From the original Fallout Equestria story, the protagonist :P

And it's coo. I could get what you were saying, least I am quite sure of it heh.

4322484 Thanks I really like that you could understand me and not get mad.

4327968 You don't really have bad english for all I can read.
And seems like way many people get worked up over things.