This is getting more and more interesting. Keep up the good work

FINALLY, got to read it.

Again, good work on the slowly increasing knowledge and skill abilities of Colleteral, and that meeting with Derpy was a really good idea!
Can't wait for the Stealth Suit to get more and more unlocks, wide range of possibilities here! (Maybe an AI upgrade? A Suit companion, say wooot?)

Also, I will be dissapointed if Colleteral will not fly any Vertibucks at some point in the story. I know, its just the start, and I can wait, but damn, this needs to happen!

All in all a good chapter, and in total all the chapters handling Colleterals recovery are well paced, can't wait for the field test on he Airbase! (that Cliffhanger tho.)

keep 'em coming! cheers!

Love this fic. Realy great so far and I can't wait for the next chapter. Any hints on when it'll be out? :D

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Soon! I had A LOT going on in the past couple months (including job interviews for a couple promotions, hardcore coding at work, trying out for a professional soccer team, Bravely Default, Dark Souls II, separated shoulder, a Fallout-reskinned D20 game, and way too much drawing) but I'm finally back and ready to continue writing.

My two weapons of mass destruction: the drink and the lead.

haven't read it yet but i just spotted something.

*or else risk losing what little humanity she has left* this is in you're story description right

*humanity* pretty sure ponies aren't human so i don't think this word applies to them.............

sorry it bugged me. shall read later

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Crap, you spend so much damn time trying to watch the humanification of your words, and there it is from day one.

Fixed, just for you.

4518656 oh stop it you