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There you go, chapter 1 all written just for YOU! Only you, and nobody else, so you better damn well enjoy it. I slaved all day and night over a hot keyboard with no bathroom breaks to ensure it was up to the standard of quality to which you are accustomed.

Love,

The DeciMayhem

Awww, thank you so much, I've been waiting all week
I would say that your slave labour worked out well!

First of all: This is a really interesting approach on the Universe, I love the personality of Collateral Damage, she has this innocent feel and a lot of Space for Development. The idea behind the story is really cool Imo. and i never saw something like it before, also your writing is decent and i didnt spot anything that breaks the reading flow. The questions you left open left me still begging for more and more!

How did she survive the bombs? Who will she meet? How does she exactly look like? What will she do? and most importantly: Is she a Lesbian?

cheers, and keep it up, you got yourself a really solid Story-idea here!

Well he somehow is in the future, weird, but still good

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All will be explained in due time.

Heh. Doo time.