Well at least they saved those ponies, good chapter again

3403358 *Bows* thank you, I'll be here all week... give or take a few years.

Because Trivial left, I AM THE NEW co-EDITOR! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *Ahem* In other news, I lost my marbles. Hooray! Wait, that's not a good thing? HOORAY!

Wow, that was bloody. ._.

But overall, it was an interesting, entertaining, and kinda surreal chapter. And I like it for that. Glad to see this tale continuing. : )

3413965 Yeah we had a kinda rough few months. Hopefully we can get into more of a groove from now on

DANGER! DANGER! NYERGUDS MEGAPOST INCOMING!

I bet she'll even throw in some free kool-aid to sweeten the deal, that would certainly help explain the rumors about ponies going in there and never coming out.

That is a horrible, horrible reference

Ecnav

...reverse, add "fallout", google, reference GET! Ah. And more insight into the whole cult you're referencing :3

When I saw what she did next, all I could do was scream.

Well, that was thoroughly unsettling

The griffon and five ponies (all coincidentally wearing red shirts and somehow triggering the ellipsis icon) ended up joining before Chess decided he had enough.

That'll end well

Koyaanisqatsi...

No sooner did the zebra acknowledge the invisible singers than one of the priestesses simply trotted up and stabbed him in the face, causing him to drop his sword and collapse.

Whaaaat?! This is almost like the Indiana Jones gun scene

It was originally designed to synthesize rainbows by recycling detritus such as food waste, ruined clothing, and corpses

Really? Rainbow Factory? You went there?

I ignored the Advanced System Settings and logged out, getting back into the action right where I'd left off.

A prime chance to mess up their plans, and you leave it? Tsk

And when blood starts coming out of my filly parts, it means my birth control's been working!

...not enough facehooves in the world

She looked at the blood and gore that was left of the unicorn, and focused on it. Within seconds, it began to take the shape of three swords, which began to float into the air, levitating to V'kii's will.

Oh my goodness... this is the same blood magic Littlepip learned from the Black Book!

Does that mean this book is a soul jar as well? After all, it was made of a unicorn...

Now I can live forever, and Caesar's goons aren't around to confiscate my weed!"

...he became a vampire just so he could remain a stoner. Damn

Privately, I was horrified that he had just killed two mares unaware that they were brainwashed

Uhh, from what V'kii said, their souls were removed, leaving their bodies as willess slaves, so that doesn't really qualify as brainwashed anymore.

"Damn it! Knight jumped the gun! Come on, hurry!"

Don't worry. Knight's "immorality" will protect her!

One of the shots accidentally hit the spellbook, obliterating it.

Whew! NOT a soul jar, then!

And it seems the soulless pones could be restored after all. That's more leeway than the Wasteland usually gives

She turned and led us to the bar. I couldn't help but make the observation that compared to ponies, zebra mares tended to have nice big plots... J-just an observation! Not staring! Not staring at all!

Zebradonkadonk is best badonkadonk!

SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT! Congratulations to us! With a record 1,549 gallons and one period joke, this is officially the bloodiest Fallout Equestria chapter EVER!

You set high standards for the rest of us, Click Clack!

Remarks and corrections:
> which Checkmate employees would then carry out. Really, if
seems like an errant line break there.
> I picked up some extra caps doing repair work, reading, chilling out with Bishop, and even building up my fighting skills
Uhh, like this, this is a summation of things he does to pick up some extra caps. I doubt reading, chilling out with Bishop and building up his fighting skills would earn him many caps.
Should be "I picked up some extra caps doing repair work, read, chilled out with Bishop, and even built up my fighting skills"
...though I do advise expanding the "read" a bit in this case, or changing its location in the list.
> It was two weeks after Whinnyaplolis
Whinnyap-lolis. Famed for its many sexy underage mares.
> Our compatriot, Arimaa, is being held captive by the Embrace.
No capital letter after a colon.
> but red shirted ponies looked strong enough.
"but [the] red shirted ponies"
> a newfound fear of letting Knight near children imbedded into my mind
"imbedded" is archaic spelling. Use "embedded" :p
> and started them in.
Honestly no clue what that's supposed to mean.
> going on the same side that the giant device had been on.
"had been" implies it's gone at that point. Should just be "was"
> "Wow! Caesar? That's some heavy stuff. Well you better get to it, babe," he leaned forward
That is not a "s/he said" construction. End the quote on a period and start with a capital letter after it.
> leaned forward and kissed me (Ugh! Gotta keep reminding myself that this is V'kii!) and trotted past
You use "and ... and" here, whioch kinda looks bad in summation. Would be better as "leaned forward[,] kissed me (...) and trotted past"
> I am more than confidant in your abilities
"confident". A confidant is someone you confide in, and, notably, not an adjective.
> I felt bad for all the times I scorned her taste in the music I'd heard from Red Eye's radio station.
What? Red Eye's broadcasts occasionally took over the Spritebots and made them broadcast stuff that wasn't music! He didn't broadcast that music at all.
> Before Fluttershy could object, Pinkie took one of the Mint-Als and shoved it in her mouth.
This kinda says Pinkie shoved it into her own mouth... not into Fluttershy's. Maybe "her friend's mouth"?
> They'd taken all of mine and Chess's gear
"my", not "mine". Basic rule for "X and Y" situations is to make the sentence so it still fits after removing the "and Y" part.
> Bishop on the other hoof was aided by a nice rush of adrenaline
Commas around "on the other hoof".
> he was able to start it up again before she escaped
Missing period at the end.
> the list of impending fiascoes.
"fiascos"

3429370 Thanks for the feedback Yeah, I think this has been one of the most reference filled, line crossingest chapter I've done (so far). Incidentally, Ecnav is a DOUBLE reference when you factor in New Vegas. My only regret is that the final fight may have been a bit rushed Ah well.

Hiiiii there~ I'm mainly just checking in to ask how things are going and to thank you for sharing your creative labor.

3808496 Things are going fine, thank you! It's really flattering seeing this level of interest. I hit a bit of a block, but I've used the opportunity to branch out into other projects (I've read that's good for the creative process) but WW is far from abandoned.

3809036 Oooh, OK. I can totally understand getting into a block, and it's nice to hear that you're still up to creative stuffs. :)

3809246 Yeah. there's another MLP/video game crossover I'm working on. The game's getting its english translation released soon, and I'm hoping to do to it what Kkat did to Fallout... well, probably to a lesser extent, but you get it.

3918337 The Wasteland detected the musical numbers and humor going on and boosted the difficulty level to compensate.

This is awesome, I look forward to the next chapter!

One thing that slightly bugged me, though, was "the blood formed a wall of blood". Just using the word twice like that, I dunno. But not enough to make me stop loving this story!

Finally, I'm totally shipping Click Click x Bishop.

3966890 Wow, nice catch. That's probably one of my most common mistakes (that and misspelling surprize, like so) because I try to play around with the wording and I forget to delete words that I wanted to move somewhere else.

And Clishop is a preferred pairing among those of my editors who aren't still looking for a phoenix down for Stellar. I like to think they're one genderbending potion away from Bishop making a move.

3966890 I know I already replied once, but I thought you might like to know that another one of my prereaders ships Click x Carrion of all ponies.

Thanks for all the faves, BTW.

3967659 I saw a waifu comment regarding her... Is the ship named? If not, I propose Clarrionet.

Edit: Dang it, I can't figure out how to reply properly on my android tablet, I get no hover thing to click.

Edit Edit: Nevermind, guess I did it right.

5436885 Eventually. I've been looking to pick this back up soon ;3

5842448 Well, that's what she gets for being somewhat rude to Fluttershy that one time.

5844348 But she survived as a Ghoul, damn what a way to survive. Still only on chapter 4 as of now. And then I look at the last time this was updated and wonder if its worth continuing to read.

And done, now if it only had a continuation. Did get a kick out of the red shirts though...

5849271 I do want to come back to it, but after I reboot my murder mystery story. School killed my productivity, TBH. Killed it right in the face.

5851199 well there is always hope. Right?

5851218 I'd say so. I think I have to restructure some stuff, but there's plenty more for to do in the WW universe.

Write moar on this!

Or, y'know, at least read through that huge corrections lists I gave; none of it on this chapter has been fixed