2514278 Love that video response to this chapter.

Oh noes! White Mane's supple, mareish flanks have acted as a gay entry drug for Piper!

And thus is the main plot of the fic introduced - White Mane's growing gayification aura, and the consequences on pony society.

Sweet new chapter!
*begins reading* “Oh Piper, fuck me harder!”
God dammit! *unbuckles belt and removes pants.*

No but seriously, I really enjoyed this chapter.

A pre-school on fire.

huh ok then...

Two Manticores mating.

what eww um ok then

His Grandmother.

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A few excessive uses of commas, but still quite funny and amusing.

...and that's all I have to say about that...

clamps hooves over mouth to prevent loud squeeing

thats right piper, keep your options open

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Eeee, I'm really enjoying this! I was wondering just yesterday when this would update, and it didn't disappoint.

Oh Piper, you coming to terms with yourself is going to be adorable

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Yeah, I noticed/ It still links to youtube though.

I never really get into stories where it doesn't involve the Mane Six. This story is the exception, literally the only exception. I'm almost enthralled in this story. Colt cuddling roommates in college? I can dig that.

I wonder if Piper's noticed that he's been asked out?
Now we have three potential conflict arcs ahead.
White Mane and Brawler...
Piper and Stormy
And whatever led up to Stormy and White Mane sleeping together. I look forward to what happens.

Piper seems to me from that dream and how he is around White, bi-curious or bisexual. There's conflict to be made of that. Is he attracted to White because of how similar he acts and dresses like a mare? Is it just sexual?

I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop and it will be glorious.

As for their friends, they seem interesting. Especially Scout Honor. He reminds me of another type of 'something'. Like a copy of White Mane in a way. Something that balances their naivety toward the world and sexuality.

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Thanks for the review(s)
Chapter 3 (Which, as it stands is like 99.99% done and with a few quick edits and a little bit of spit shine, will be ready to post this week.) should help clear up all your questions.

As for White Mane's little crew; I really threw them in to show a different side of Camden; it's not all crazy coke parties and sex orgies, these are the guys (and Gryphon) who actually crack open the books and study. Sunny Side and Honey Drop are there for White Mane to reflect positively off of, they're like his Gay Guardian Angels. Scout's sort of a wannabe cool kid. Vincent's quiet but he's the guy most likely to leave a party with a girl. I didn't really get a chance to sell them as character (They're sorta just plot devices in chapter 2) but they'll have their moments here and there.

2583353 Seeing this comment made me squeal non stop, can't wait, hope it comes out before 12! Love all your stuff and this is probably my favorite right now!

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Seeing this comment made me blush like the shy gay kid in the gym locker room
I'm so glad you're really enjoying the story so far! I can't find the words to say this without sounding corny, but, it's flippin amazing to get to have someone say something like that about my writing, it really makes writing all these stories so worth while knowing I have fans like you who read them and like them.

Chapter 3 is done and in between running errands and attending a pants-crapping stressful University interview I have tomorrow, I'll try and publish it.

2584835 Sounds great! Good luck with your university interviews, hope it runs smoothly!