So good, and so excited that a new chapter has been added to the story! Loved the Princess Bride reference, and I am so excited for the next chapter and for what awaits Zero, Quill, and Willow!!
11280325 I live for feedback such as yours, thank you so much for taking the time to write out all your thoughts! The early chapters (before I earned my dedicated and lovely editor) always felt the roughest to me, so I certainly agree with many of your criticisms and have sought to continuously improve wherever I can since then. This story is the second one I've ever seriously undertaken and it's taught me so much in the past five-plus years! Glad you've enjoyed the narration thus far, I feel like that's where I've always been the strongest in my writing. I like pegasi too c:
If you're happy to see magical items like wards, I also think you'll really enjoy some of the more recent chapters.
So good, and so excited that a new chapter has been added to the story! Loved the Princess Bride reference, and I am so excited for the next chapter and for what awaits Zero, Quill, and Willow!!
Moar please
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More is on its way! Hope you've enjoyed it so far~
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very much so... also when will we get fallout Florida lol
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Yey! And I don't know if we'll ever get an official one, but there's the fan mod Fallout: Miami to look forward to c:
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As far as he knows, he lost Quillwright (his lover), Ardent (his best friend), and Vox (his mentor).
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I never expected them to be lover's
Just started rereading it, and hungry for more. Keep up the good work. <3
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That means a lot, thank you! Next chapter is underway c:
Just binged through this. Wonderful story, and hope the next chapter is going well.
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Awh, thank you! c: It is indeed going well, and if you'd like another small story from this region to tide you over, I wrote one featuring a soon-to-be upcoming character!
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I live for feedback such as yours, thank you so much for taking the time to write out all your thoughts! The early chapters (before I earned my dedicated and lovely editor) always felt the roughest to me, so I certainly agree with many of your criticisms and have sought to continuously improve wherever I can since then. This story is the second one I've ever seriously undertaken and it's taught me so much in the past five-plus years! Glad you've enjoyed the narration thus far, I feel like that's where I've always been the strongest in my writing. I like pegasi too c:
If you're happy to see magical items like wards, I also think you'll really enjoy some of the more recent chapters.
Caught up and looking forward to reading more. Great work!
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Thank you! The next chapter is complete, I'm just doing some work on the beginning of the following chapter before it goes live >ω<
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I'm happy to hear it's not dead ^-^
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c: