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This person has sunk 1.2 million words into this story, and it has only received 2.1k views.
I probably am not going to read this story, but holy shit that is fucking criminal.
A story that has this much effort put into it deserves *far* more attention.
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Well, I actually don't feel too bad about it. While I'm glad other people have read and liked it so far, I'm not writing for anyone but myself. Even if it didn't get any views, I'd still continue it regardless.
This story is important, it must be competed as it will endure. Amethyst Wind wrote FoE : Old Souls and I was fortunate to download it before she removed all traces from FIMfiction. I wanted to tell how much it helped me and... it was just gone. There are so many people in the shadows who appreciate what you are writing. Your writings will endure forever.
and finally, the important Win!
More fine work, can't wait for the next chapter!
I really liked the well deserved bittersweet win in this chapter. Also, why has nobody thought to use flux to heal King of his ailments yet?
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Well, I'm sure they'd use some if they had any! But it's not like they carry barrels of the poisonous stuff on board.
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True. I guess Kkat and Somber made it seem like that stuff was everywhere in the Equestrian Wasteland.
I enjoyed this chapter and liked that the alicorns reminisced on past things that Night had done. This jogs my old memories of the story and I start remembering a whole host of scenes that I thought I had forgotten... like Knight getting in trouble at school and this resulting in less shift work for his father and this resulting in fewer ration cards and less food for the family... and the early scene of flying at high speed through the forest with bloodwings chasing and crashing and being found... and how Night found and teamed up with Hispano... and his bomb-site cutie mark... and the dizzytron... and the harrowing scene of carnage when Solomon blew up the convoy and getting Buck to help... it is almost like all of these scenes would have made very entertaining stories on their own. So throw in some past reference when you can as it jogs old memories and helps to enrich the story.
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Well Blackjack (in blank body) downed a bottle of the substance in question to prove a point, and when he belched his breath melted the heads off surrounding statues. So I suppose the result is unpredictable.
Ok this theory has been building up for a while now so i want to get it out before i find the answer:
I suspect King is 'the king' as in pony Elvis. i remember him mentiong being an earth pony at some point as well. When the name Empire came up it made me think of the music lable TV show of the same name, which cemented this idea. I also suspect that the other soul is either a rabid fan or jilted lover, who is making him forget for the selfish reason to obsessivily spend time with him. if he remembered then he would know she was bad news and turn on her.