The Wasteland holds a thousand stories, yet not all are great and sweeping. Some are personal, small, or simply forgotten. These are their tales, from all their unique perspectives on the wasteland, its history, and how some may connect...
That was, an interesting story to say the least. It was a very unique experience inferring the finer details on my own as I read it. Kind of like envisioning the missing center of a picture while only analyzing its edges. Also, the amount of abstract prose felt related to how tense the situation was, with details becoming more concrete the more anticipatory Ahrim became. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I think those subtle changes greatly helped in transitioning the mood between scenes, subtly shifting my mindset to match that of the characters. Those are my thoughts on it at least, thank you once more Fuzzy for the excellent stories you provide!
That was, an interesting story to say the least. It was a very unique experience inferring the finer details on my own as I read it. Kind of like envisioning the missing center of a picture while only analyzing its edges. Also, the amount of abstract prose felt related to how tense the situation was, with details becoming more concrete the more anticipatory Ahrim became. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I think those subtle changes greatly helped in transitioning the mood between scenes, subtly shifting my mindset to match that of the characters.
Those are my thoughts on it at least, thank you once more Fuzzy for the excellent stories you provide!
Another masterpiece. Fuzzy, how do you do it so well?
Oh hello there. I was looking for a new story to read! I do hope you continue this, Fuzz!
You've been advertised at https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks
Feel free to come join us and self promote or just talk about Fo:E.