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T H O T !
So, Cherry is developing Stockholm syndrome. I can't wait for Crimson to finally come to her rescue, only for her to beg him to join her.
"Join me my love, together we can overthrow Blueheart and rule Coltchester together!" *Evil Sith cackling*
Seriously though. The longer she spends with the Coalition, the harder it's going to be to actually fight them when the time comes. I think she's already past the point where she would be willing to kill the rank and file soldiers anyway. This will cause some nice conflict later, (as if there's not enough things going on to cause conflict later...I'm looking at you, Eos).
Cherry is also cute being a little scaredy cat about some steps. Altho, now that I think about it, is Cherry not the hardened, tough Merc we've come to expect? Maybe she just wants to prance around with shiny things in her mane...
If she needs help getting over that fear of heights, just call Dew Drop. He'll start her off small...maybe let her be on top...
Anywho... nice chapter. Doesn't feel like the story moved forward much, but it's good character development. The fight scene was good too, though I wonder who exactly that was. Was Cherry killing resistance forces, or some other group? Maybe we'll find out next chapter.
Hurry up and get back to writing!
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On a side note, at the time of typing this there is 24 views on this chapter.
WHY THE FUCK AM I THE ONLY ONE LEAVING A COMMENT??
Quit being little pussies READERS. Tell me what you think about this story
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Your thoughts on how Cherry is gonna behave are very interesting to see. I'd love to see what others think (hint hint for other folks, he makes a real good point there!), but I definitely find your opinion intruging. Just like on the discord, I won't say anything other than I have my plans set in stone and these plans are years old - so I'm afraid you won't be able to sway me on the matter.
Cherry being a scaredy cat is something I really, really enjoyed myself. It was fun to write but it also acts as a way of bringing her back down to earth, in my opinion. Before that, she *has* been this exceptionally well trained, seemingly fearless killer who can achieve so much but didn't seem to have much of a weakness other than her desire not to kill. That's why I've slowly been adding in these moments where she has weakness, and I'll admit, this hasn't been some long planned event - the vast majority of my characterisation and developments are intentionally organic as I much prefer to let the characters guide their own paths - but with her previous experience with falling from heights, it made sense to develop upon that and it was fitting, in my mind. To reduce the once mighty, seemingly fearless mercenary into what the truth is; a well trained pony who is still at the end of the day, just a pony. She's not a mindless, uncaring, unflinching machine of death and destruction - she's *her*.
In regards to Dew Drop? No comment. :^)
As for the chapter pushing the story forward? You're right, The chapter wasn't meant to push the narrative along so much as just give it a little more credulence. Though I'll be quiet now, don't want to say too much
Lastly? I really do hope that other readers find the confidence to comment at some point. Or even join our Discord and contact me through that.
For anyone interested, you can find me hanging out in https://discord.gg/kyrvxtC <--- this discord. I'd really, really love to hear what others think. I used to get a lot of feedback from a lot of people, but I don't hear from anyone other than Stan or a small bit from Regolit these days, so anything is appreciated. Thank you!
Why is Trixie RED?! WHAT DID YOU DOOO?!
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I am going to kick your ass, Sonny Jim.
Completely forgot about posting this art sooner! Bad, bad Kip!
Have some art! Two versions of the same pic, the yellow background was my idea, green background was artists choice. The artist also went further into the design of the brooch, and is now the canon design for it (something I intend to alter into the chapter when I'm next around and not tired as heck)
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Hope you all enjoy! :D
Edit; the artist is shy. They have no DA or even Derpibooru prescence, but they exist and would undoubtedly love any feedback. I'll make sure to pass on anything I see.