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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like? Or did I already ask this?
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I wouldn't remember if you've asked this particular question or if it was other people, but that's a question I've encountered before Unfortunately, I fucking suck at figuring out how they sound.
The good news is that I do have some kind of idea how Cherry sounds, but I'm keeping that a secret for the moment because I have something really special planned.
The only guide I can really give is that everyone has a British accent aside from the alicorns which are more of a mixture Trans-Atlantic and regal British monarchy sounding. Crimson is young and plucky, he hasn't got some kind of super awesome McMainHero voice but it isn't nasally and weak either.
As for Cherry, like I say, I have something special planned for her.
As for Titan... British ghoul. lol.
Not going to point out grammar stuff because I only noticed a few and would have to reread the chapter to find them.
Can Eos be any more of a needy little baby? Poor Crimmy, dead before his time. What he gets for cheating on Cherry :^)
Tsunami saves the day! It's about time somepony put Eos in her place. I didn't think Crimson would though. Man that was rough. (I didn't think you had it in you to write, good job!)
Lots of side character interaction going on. Sandstorm is too cute. Love, love, LOVE Selene and Helios. We need a side story focusing on the three sisters. Something to think about when this is over.
Titan is fun too. We need some memory orb flashbacks or something for him, maybe to his military service?
Need more Maisy and Snugglebums being smart. (Maybe they can rescue Cherry?)
Good Blackja- I mean, Go Fish game. Apparently Eos didn't learn her lesson. Straight back to teasing and hanging all over Crimson. Cherry is gunna be pissed, and Crimmy is gunna deserve it.
Overall a good SoL chapter. You handle multiple character interaction superbly. Looking forward to more!
#FreeCherrySundae
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I'll have to go through the chapter and scan for grammar. Thanks for the heads up! Its too easy to overlook grammar mistakes.
Can Eos be any more of a needy little baby? Yes. Absolutely yes. And she has another moment in the next chapter all written up.
I appreciate the compliment! Though what do you mean? ;) Are you saying I waifufag her or something? Are you saying I waifufag her too hard to tell her off?
As for the side character interaction, I realised I'd been letting them all down and not showing them some love, though I felt like this would be a good time to add them back in and for it to feel natural. Usually Crimson is oh so busy with this and that and what have you that he just doesn't pay them enough attention. [read as: I forget to make them more visible. lol. Not Crimson's fault I'm bad.]
Writing a story about Titan is something I've half considered in the past, and I think it could be interesting, yeah. I don't know if I could make it anything more than a short story, absolutely nothing like Broken Bonds, but an idea worth keeping around. And I'm really glad you loved the girlies. I had a feeling you would and specifically wanted to have them really shine some more in this chapter for you, so I'm glad I hit the mark with that. Fan feedback on what's good and what needs to be seen more is something important to me and whilst I won't change the direction of the story as a whole, I'm absolutely flexible about increasing how much screen time any particular character gets if the audience want it.
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Eos will never learn her lesson. I promise you that. I enjoy her not learning that lesson way too much to let her learn it.
Thank you again! I really am glad you think so on all accounts. As I've said in the Discord, I'm already 3,000 words into the next chapter, so as long as I keep up what I'm doing, it might not even be all that much longer before I'm ready to release another. I can't promise I'll always keep this momentum, but while I've got it, I'll make use of it for as long as I can!