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You have my undying thanks for not leaving off on this cliffhanger. With that last line, and Whisper raising so many death flags, I don't think I could have handled that.
Wait. Megaspells AREN'T FAILSAFE?!?! Holy fuck, that's terrifying. Imagine if nukes weren't failsafe... *shivers*.
hmm. changeling lead raid into enemy hive to rescue ponies. Sounds kinda familiar. Although I think this version is better.
"while another part me admires the"
"while another part of me admires the"?
"and vent itself created a tiny nook"
"and the vent itself created a tiny nook"?
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If nukes weren't failsafe, then missile silos could explode, but at least population centers would hopefully be mostly safe.
Wait so is she actually a queen now?
Wouldn't it be silly if Phoenix blew Whisper's and our expectations, and Chrysalis doesn't live up to her namesake, and surrenders? Like... Whisper records the throne room with a pipbuck, and when Chrysalis is clear, Echo bloops in, and then just bloops Chrysalis out into capture? Or... Whisper jumps her, gets her in a headlock, and she gives up because she's not so fanatical as to die for her own hive? (Also because without her there is no hive.)
There was also a huge missed opportunity here.
"Attention all dipshits, this is Sickle. I'm coming in there to wreck shit. You have two choices. You fucks can wait there until I find you and beat you to a pulp in front of your loved ones, or you can come out now, surrender, and I'll make you ice cream." *the sounds of Sickle messily enjoying some ice cream* "Mmmm, fuck yesh. Shtrawburry shwirl. Your move, bug butts. Death and dismemberment, or strawberry swirl for everyone." *in the background you can hear some of the other changelings enjoying ice cream too*
Squeak?
Toldya
Camera drones!
Oh, huh. I guess those who were so violent about stopping them before also got the fight washed out of them by the storm.
Holy shit, yes, genocide! Why didn't we consider that option before?!
...
Well, play to your strengths, y'know.
By now, "manipulative" is just Echo's way of saying "anything Whisper does that I don't like"
"Yay, toys!"
Hah. Never on the first try.
Well, you don't really need a live feed. Though twenty seconds per frame is a bit slow, I guess.
By the end of the day, she had invented jpeg compression
Oh, wow. They're dumping a freaking army in there
It usually isn't
Yay, raccoon!
Plot twist: they just got a giant ants infestation in their air ducts.
I'm fairly sure that counts as forgery, yea
Ohey. That's one target located, at least.
Queenie has a bit of a one-track mind, huh? Ocelli seems like a more moderate 'ling... even after what Whisper did to her last time
-slipped in and slit her throat?
No? Aw. I thought that was the plan!
It is a bit distressing... I hope the next chapters aren't suddenly narrated by someone else
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Not quite that giant; those won't fit through any air ducts. But props for the Red Alert 1 reference
Hmm, was randomly rereading some of this, and found another mistake:
> Personally, I would imagine we want to sent our hardest hitters.
"we want to [send]"
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Aaand fixed. Thanks
> we can use it to to ‘test the waters.’
double "to".
> followed by Two Bit’s voice
The name is "Two Bits", so that should be "Two Bits’s voice".
(Normally, behind an 's', you just add the apostrophe, but when names are involved, you add the full apostrophe+s)
i'm on my way to the end and this story is beautiful.