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Welp I have fallen almost a month behind, time to catch up and steal that first comment before anyone else wakes up from their early winter hibernation.
Your lack of beeping sheeps sadly means that I have to take your upvote away and give you a down vote instead. I hope that you will learn from your mistake and implement beeping sheeps in the future.
With lines like those… you sure that you ain't writing a clop story?
Nitpicks:
"His flesh stretched and blood started pour out of the wound. " Should it not be pouring? I am always so unsure about the tense of this word.
"a stunning tan unicorn with a bleach blonde man and white lab coat" You forgot an e