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Great Work as always, somber! Looking Forward to see the next chapter.
So I read this all to chapter 18 in 3 days.
Awesome so far and fyi, you're at exactly 1000 pages!
(Including author notes)
Always good to see this journey continue. It'd been a little bit since I read the last chapter, I'd almost lost track of the large amount of characters, but it was still good to get an overview of sorts of the older cast members.
Thanks for all your hard work, cheers!
You fuckin’ rock. If you make any real books, I’d buy them
Holy shit this was a great chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens to Thrush and crew.
The greatest thing on Fimfiction. Needs more views and upvotes!
This was a great chapter to return to
Oh hell yes, another update!
Hm. The last update didn't show up for me and just the other day I was thinking that you're extremely late with your update.
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Finally! An explanation of Precious' missing horn. The Brood stomped it off.
Also, Majina, is her name pronounced Ma-J-Ee-Nah or Ma-J-Eye-Nah or something else?
Oh hell yes! Awesome chapter, lots of new information, a wonderful drunken sailor mare and her merry band of numerals, and Scotch snarking at bugs -- what more could we ask for!
"“So, like, didn’t you once have a horn?” Majina asked around her mouthful of tack. “I remember the first time I saw you in Chapel you had one. You even did magic with it.”"
...Whoops. Did we miss that?
"cheeks spit to let the grin go straight to her ears"
"cheeks split to let the grin go straight to her ears"?
"Scotch sighed, sitting down. “I wish he hadn’t given it to me. I wish he’d at least asked me!”"
Well, if he gave it to you, that's still better than what I'd thought had happened (the book sending itself with you).
"We’ve been marooned on this rust bucket that we’re practically selling ourselves just to keep our heads above water."
Missing words?
"A wall of air brushed the weedy growth aside."
Based on later text, maybe "A wall of air brushed the weedy growth ahead aside." would be better, if I'm understanding the situation correctly?
"only for him stagger at the last"
"only for him to stagger at the last"?
"bobbing in one of wider sections"
"bobbing in one of the wider sections"?
Another excellent chapter, Somber! :D
Day is good, new chapter from Somber makes life all the sweeter.
Yeah, might as well call this one a double update thanks to FIMfic...*grumble*
I've gotta say, that scene with Vicious and the...whateverthefuckthatwas...was legitimately unsettling.
Equally unsettling is the massive amount of twisted destruction that thing left behind, hidden.
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I think, chapter was added in april (when there was sauce on parteon) but was not published until edits done
wait, wait, why I have deja vue about this?
And Trush reminds me that kajit captain from ESO, she gets stuck in every hole possible in game (Tamriel-side and sea shore at least).
I'm so glad this wasn't just another story focused on just Scotch Tape and her group. It's good to know who is doing what within this story. Keep up the great work!
There needs to be more fanart of this story. I’d contribute myself but I can’t draw worth shit.
I love you somber
Hell yeah! We get to see more Vicious in action. Now that she most likely has cancer and Scotch is being hunted, things are personal. If I was that spirit eater, I'd be pretty damn scared.
Awesome chapter!!!!
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I agree wholeheartedly!
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I have always thought it as Ma-Jee-Na
Yee!
She lost the Seahorse? She truly is pony Jack Sparrow. Always losing their primary ship.
Because much like Blackjack, Scotch Tape has the habit of causing people she meets to 'do better'.
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I believe the Zencori use Japanese or Swahili pronunciations, so yes, mah-JEEN-ah should be correct.
Okay... Skylord... your weapon privileges are hereby revoked.
Yes, all of them.
And the backup.
This is the kind of chase scene I always want to run in an RPG.
...or you just walked into Bigger Fish territory?
Uh oh? Your PipBuck still working, Scotch?
Oh. I see. Still uh-oh, but different uh-oh.
Ooh. Shades of The Witcher?
D'awww...
Something something eye of the world
Now there ya go!
Recalibrating "slightest hazard" for a born sailor...
Oh, geez, how big a storm were we talking, here? And I'm sure we're it's a littoral vessel, not something intended for blue-water use.
HAH! You mean a little something liiike... this?
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Given the theme of the owners, I kinda wish Egress was the name of the bouncer.
Oh my god, is it--
IT IS!
I'm penciling Thrush in as "possibly cursed".
So in-character it hurts.
LOL
...huh. That is both weirdly decent and probably unwise.
Dhruva: Sanskrit, "The Unmoving". Hindu name for Polaris. Cool!
Uhhh, shit?
Oh... kay... I'm guessing this is who the stallion in the cave was waiting to move again. I'm just going to assume we've never met her outside of... super-entropy-spirit mode... and move on.
Hee! This is a player hoping to use Research to fake Survival.
...and quite possibly pulling it off.
Dammit, Trailblazer. Do you have a body? Like, permanently?
Hee!
Huh... that sounds Important. But who would the playboy of the Magnificent 12 be unable to pursue? Zinat? ...Tanit?
Unless some super-powerful spirit were shielding her from censure? Wasteland, maybe?
YES.
Yeah, that. ...I'm slightly disturbed to be on the same wavelength as Vicious.
....Pythia is the Serpent isn't she.......the Starkattari who betrayed the others
cursed to reincarnate for eternity for her betrayal?
You wanna get ahead? Fools who run their mouths off wind up dead.
... FUCK!!!
THESE FEELS! THEY HURT!!
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There's no greater compliment to an author than "you made me feel things."
Team Pythia
That's one way to do it.
Wheeew goddamn... finally finished! Glad to have finally finished these two updates, these were damn good reads, damn good reads
Good show, and man, can't wait to see where this is going.
Keep it up!
So how exactly does a spirit know who they have made a deal with? At first this seems like a simple question but let’s say we have two zebras that look exactly the same, zebra 1 makes a deal and zebra 2 doesn’t, how does the spirit know zebra 1 made the deal?
That part about the cancer was intense. I had to Google what osteoblasts were, and I don't even think a non-post apocalyptic equestria could cure that kind of cancer easily. Then again, magic and such.
Poor vicious
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An ouroboros, maybe!
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It sees the individual's soul. That's the person's spirit. A mask is a formal wall between the spirit and the soul, giving a barrier between the two. This protects the spirit and the individual. When there's no mask, the spirit can directly corrupt or influence the soul. Worse, because the soul is a kind of spirit, it's possible to merge two spirits together. That's what happened to Riptide's foal. She pulled the spirit too close and it glommed to her. A very skilled shaman could do this to possess an animal or even shapeshift, but most end up crazy or mutated. It's a consequence of being spirit ridden. Censure also hits the person's soul. It's why spirit eating is so taboo. You destroy the spirit, and the spirit has carte blanche to do whatever it wants or can to your soul.
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YES! perfect =D
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I’ve had this theory for a while now and this along with some of the other stuff I’ve seen you say about this topic kind of proves my theory that BlackJack technically never made a deal with the stars because she was using Luna’s soul at the time she made the deal. is there anything that disproves this or is it a continuity error or even somehow a future plot point ?
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Those spirits are, unfortunately, a lot smarter than your average spirit. You are on a major point, but I won't elaborate for spoilers sake. Stars are the third strongest spirits out there, and they can easily put name to soul. Besides, Blackjack's already gotten their attention once when she was in her own body and soul at Star Point. So when Blackjack had Pythia make that deal, they knew the soul connected to the name.
However, you make a good point, and it would be a loophole if Blackjack found Pythia and had her try to amend the deal.
So much happening in this chapter. It's great. I loved seeing Thrush again.. Plus that scene with Scotch looking up at the moomn. That hurt my heart. I continue to love your work.
How did I not know this was a thing? I should've known this was a thing.
I'm gonna read this thing.
Another excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
It is good that we address this. I wonder why you do not create a character-sheet for every character rather than depending upon your memory.
Finally caught up. Glad to see another story from you.
I look forward to seeing this continue
im excited to see more somber its the perfect tale for the zebras land
Crap I'm all caught up... I need to fall behind again.
Seriously, i'm loving this story. Between my hype and hopes that scotch and pythia get together and all of this amazing zebra culture it's rekindled my desire to write a little. Keep going strong man.
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Problem is I'm really stuck. I need to move to the next part of the story, but my brain is so tied in knots right now that I can barely write at all.
I'm so sorry... u.u
we all have demons nearby but scotches is right next to her in her saddlebags
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Ahh...Somberpony meets his immortal arch nemesis, the super powerful alicorn god known as, Writer’s Block!