After 200 years, Scootaloo wakes up from magical stasis to find herself in the Equestrian Wasteland. She has to figure out a new place for herself when her friends and family are all long dead as a new threat looms on the horizon, one from her past.
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Well, for the meantime, Serenity's back in my good books as like I said, you're actually showing the affects the war has had on her, although if you went into actually showing the nightmare from her perspective, the scene could have been even better.
Can't say I'm all too pleased with the way Dazzle's daughter was born, but maybe that was supposed to be the point.
Anyways... As we're going to Coltlumbia, how does it go?
"Well there's a stormcloud stirrin' now
Revolt!
There's a stormcloud stirrin' now
Revolt!
"The filthy streets and the calloused hooves
And bloodshot Marish eyes
A floating haven for the craven
Nestled in the skies
"Well up and out and away with ya
There's a fight outside your doors
The shining pride of Equestria
Is a nation up for war!"
8743046 Yeah that's the downside of a story told from a single point of view, maybe I should've done that in chapter 34... oh well. I can always revisit that idea in future stories that could do parts told from her perspective.
As for Dazzle's daughter, well that one wasn't entirely my idea and we were exploring a couple of different ways to do it. Really either option would've raised some ethical science questions, so that was kind of unavoidable.
8743393 Yeah, while Scootaloo appeared in the wartime stuff during the original, I'm the first to give her top billing on a story, especially one after the apocalypse.
8746550 I'm a colossal nerd so there are lots of references in this fic.
Finally caught up, and holy throne has it been one hell of a roller coaster ride! But it's not over yet...
8750017 Chapter 36 will actually be done soon. I'm glad you liked it so far.
8750307 Fixed.