FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Hmm.... did we visit the thestrals yet?
I do not recall a visit to them...
Refresh my memory if you could?
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Had to put them off so no, developed into their own little section later and had to move things forward.
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Ah.
So it is something that will happen after Vega has been dealt with i assume?
Oh dear. Arc and Volume ? Meaning that next Arc will be in a sequel ?
So. Good that you hold up your convictions against Velvet, Fast. She means well, but well...
Also. Good job showing up Vega, Fast.
Soooooo... Blind Betrayal already, huh ?
Damn... Well, at least, in this Commonwealth, the Brotherood don't know yet about the Railroads, so no Railroad destruction mission immediately after... and well, with Fast's insistence on "ponyfiying Synths", i hope that when they come on the scene, they can join the Alliance. Heh, that's a bit what was lacking in canon FO4. No way to do a united front Against a common enemy. They're all set in their ways, and want their slice of the cake. Here ? Team Fast had far more factions to treat with and was able to unify them. Since there's still Dreadnot to go, the Railroads to convince to ally, Virescent to finish her Adventures (i imagine her so much coming during a pinch in a Big Damn Hero moment, in a Trenchcoat like Nick, and the Synth himself coming up from behind her like "'sup.")... The alliance has still room to expend in future Arcs...
There's also Mobius, the Mysteries of the "Be Dark", the last Ministry Mare Statuette (will be important for "Be Dark" i bet...)
Damn, the adventure continues, the End of Fast's adventures is still pretty far... and that's not a problem for me, i'm still Hooked. XD
Hm... since you gave the impression you want to do a volume 2 (at least i understood it this way), can i ask you little request ?
Once the first volume is complete, could you focus a bit on Virescent's side for a bit before going back to begin the Main volume 2 ? It can seems weird, but i feel that her side is lagging behind a lot... and if she join back the Main Story without her side story being complete, it'd make the reader confused i think. If she join back the main story (i think it's a foregone conclusion but i could be wrong.) of course.
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Not really a full out sequel, just another line of demarcation like Ch. 50, may actually reach 100 and have it be nice and even. Had planned on doing catch up on Fog Harbor too, so no worries, have to play through the dlc again and focus on it a little, but she probably won't come back in until the next book/volume.
I hope fast finds his family and friends soon I really will feel bad that after everything that he has been through just to find them all dead or worse became mutants that he has to kill.
Fast the alicorns will be a powerful ally against any enemies from Equestria. Remember, Gardens has purged all the radiation from there so the Commonwealth is the best place for them really. Velvet may be The Pony Who Helps, but if you don't watch she'll be helping herself to a big slice of the Commonwealth.
Finally got around to read it for the past five days, and I like the story so far. I am glade that you actually decided to go fully embrace the alternate universe of MLP and include post season three characters, and give them their own twist of how they didn't change their outlook on life. I see this story as more of a vanilla story compared to other FoE stories as the drama isn't as intense as some of the earlier, more established FoE stories, still an enjoyable read and makes me want to go back to reading more FoE stories again.
Also, a little thing that might get your attention on me if you keep up the quality of your work up so far.
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Then maybe, you should start acting like someone worthy of using that name
Aannnd he's down
So... I'm wondering if the notion of minimum population vs. Genetic Diversity will be bought up at any point by anypony. Fast might be the first viable male alicorn, and he's certainly proved that already. But surely the compatibility potion and mass-production of it is a better long-term goal to introduce better genetic diversity by reducing the potential for inbreeding among the inevitable descendants of the Alicorns that result?
Of course, they all get so love-blind that actually making them act logical or see sense is futile (and is personally one of my only gripes with the story; it does get a bit grating after the umpteenth time), but unless Dr. Dala's potion had some kind of aspect that makes it able to avoid complication resulting from inbreeding - which would be a point to mention - I feel as though it's something Velvet at least might be knowledgeable about, and certainly I would imagine the Dr herself would know of it, as she's supposed to be a genius at genetics.
Would be something worth addressing at some point imho, and who knows, maybe it'll even get Fast out of his sticky 'situation' with the alicorns.
(also apologies if it's already been discussed, or mentioned and I missed it)
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I'll work on it, Swan makes the three promised so can move on and address it eventually.
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I want to point out that it's not a huge negative for me, and I wasn't meaning to be a downer about it - I love the story and what you've done with it so far as well, and I'm enjoying following things as they happen. I just thought it might be an interesting angle to explore, and might lead to more interesting developments down the line.
I'm eagerly awaiting more of the story, and good to see you're still here and still working on it too. Please keep up the good work!
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Oh no worries, it was valid and useful constructive criticism which I appreciate. Thanks for reading and caring enough to offer your opinion trying to improve the story. It's something I've been considering and will probably be addressed in the next arc/book eventually. Mostly making things up as I go along, so hearing an outside view on it helps and gives new directions to think about.
Juss gunna poooooooke.... a story.
Now that you've said that, all I can think of is how Fast would get along with the folks from the Fary Tail guild from Farytail.
Et tu Glitter ?
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Im afraid Fast cannot do their little handsign.
Let the fun begin
I chuckled through this whole part
Another great chapter, reminded me that I may have forgotten how some characters are like from the original story. Such as Velvet's attitude and Calamity's wing.
Shame about Blue but I had started wondering/suspecting about her. Guess we'll see what happens to her later on.
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Ok, I’m going to have to explain myself.
Yes, Velvet can be bitchy, self-centered, manipulative, and heck, even a bit of a jerk (honestly why I love her so much; I like her flaws with the strengths), but I don’t quite recall her being this bad. I’m a huge Velvet fan (and I stand by that), but we’ve actually never gotten to see her with a friendly pony she doesn’t like. It might be rose-colored glasses, it might be stress, or it might be something else, but she usually seems more candid than this. Any matter, I enjoyed her appearance nonetheless.
Also, Blind Betrayal is a mission that exists, which I haven’t done yet because I’m lagging so far behind in their storyline, oh well. I’m going to have to see how this one turns out,
True Blue! I had a feeling!
Honestly it's not too surprising, when Fast found her she was all on her own and not many military organizations would send anyone out on their own