Everyone has heard the stories of Fillydelphia, from the Stable Dweller herself down to the lowliest slaves that survived the unspeakable horrors and hardships. Many forget those who weren't slaves or slavers, but they have stories too...
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Awh man, it always sucks to get to the end of the chapter.
Great work as always, Telgin!
Good stuff man.
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I'm glad to hear that you've enjoyed it, and that the tone I'd hope to set has come across well. This story isn't the original, nor is it MN7, but I'm happy so long as anyone enjoys it.
I kind of wish now that I'd devoted NaNoWriMo to working on this story instead of something else, but I'll be back to working on it again soon. I'm excited to get to some of the parts coming up.
I'm not even a Brony anymore and i have lost interest in most MLP related things...
Yet even after years i keep coming back to this site, only to check if this has been updated, over and over again.
Your characters are greatly defined and the protagonist very well fleshed out, the entire story has plenty of ups, downs (Kaz screw ups mostly.. lol) there's always something new i never expect each chapter, scenes are well described and the fact that the POV of this story comes from such a lovable and interesting character working on the "bad" side of the Fo:E adds much more originality and depth compared to many other Fo:E fics have read in the past. (Which tend to portray everything as black/white, good/evil... it's not like every Talon is Red Eye or Stern.)
I still can't believe this is not one of the main/popular Fo:E stories, it's severely underrated.
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I'm flattered that you like this story so much!
I'm glad that the intention continues to come across well. I've been worried for a while that it was beginning to become repetitive or stale, but I guess we're all our own worst critics.
And I wish I could update it more frequently than I have been. I am still working on it, but don't have the time I used to. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up in a couple of weeks, and hope those that follow will be a bit more quickly forthcoming than the last few. I've got a better idea of what will happen that will bring the story to a close, hopefully bringing the story back around some to its original premise.
Please tell me that the griffoness just looked like Liese, and Kaz did not kill his sister accidentally.
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Don't worry, addled or not, he'd have recognized Liese. It was just some other griffon who picked the wrong path in life.
Kas I swear if you get shot in the left Tit I will end you.
When the plan is to use dart guns in a thunderstorm:
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Presumably command didn't know the weather would be so crappy at the time, but the results were predictable nonetheless...