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Step one went smoothly.
Okay, this one was a lot of fun. Things are on a roll now.
Now, a little bit of bad news. Fall semester just started up, and while the amount of work hasn't quite led to think "I've made a horrible mistake", it's certainly up there. Between the classes being held at the same time I usually get my most productive writing done, and the ever-so-slightly horrifying amount of homework involved, free time is going to suffer, so I can't make any promises as to how quickly updates will come. After all, schoolwork has a strict deadline, while this does not. That said... well, the story is kind of building up momentum from here, so I hope to still get plenty of writing done. I just can't make any promises.
Oh boy, here we go.
well fuck dood, rip serenity
Whisper better sleep with one eye open. With how much she is stirring up the ponies Serenity will be forced to commit resources to dealing with the changeling standing in direct opposition to them.
...I need more popcorn.
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You know, I'm kinda waiting on Whisper to reveal herself and it doesn't go smoothly. So far she is 3 for 3, how long can she keep up that record? :3
Yeah, a tank is nice and all... But I'm pretty sure Serenity has at least a couple.
I'll admit though, I hope Serenity is dealt with quick. I kind of liked the fic more before Serenity... But I also tend to a butt ton of playing before I do the main quest in FO as well.
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its okay, you have enough love from the readers that you can take it slow if you need to.
Damn it. Smart bug managed to get Sandstorm to kill her in anger. No interrogation, no intelligence. They're charging in blind.
Still, they'll hopefully keep the element of surprise long enough and have sufficient firepower to bloody Chrysalis' nose.
Oh, what a day. What a lovely day!
Does the Beast Roar "Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunt!"?
Sort of.
Give me some insight into the tank’s design. Based on a wartime vehicle or pure post-apocalyptic madness?
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Considering it has a ram in the front and spikes at the top, which don't sound like typical wartime accessories, I'd say it's somewhat modified to fit a raider's sense of fashion. Could use some war drums, though. Maybe a platform with a flamethrower-guitar?
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Metal!
There’s no denying the influence of the Wasteland on it!
What I want to know is the extent of that influence: whether we’re looking at a pony T-34 with spikes and attachments or some crazy Mad Max amalgamation that barely resembles the common image of a tank.
Uh-oh. I don't see the populace warming up to Whisper any time soon.
How do they have a tank?! All we get is a fucking puma!
Ayy lmao, that's metal
Dunno why I am expecting her to say " Ah mediocre " soon or later xD
There's a period missing here.
'worst' here should be 'worse'.
'and' here should be replaced with 'but', or possibly just removed.
Is this bit supposed to refer to Echo's shield? The guard isn't described as having a shield anywhere before this, and this is a good spot to mention that Echo's shield is still up.
Other than that, top-tier shit as usual, PD.
Look like a good suicide expedition. Maybe 500 hundred ponies against a thousand trained changeling?
CUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNTTTTT!!!!!!!!!
Ok shit is getting done way ahead of schedule but no time to look a gift HORSE in the mouth.
So hopefully we're going to make stops at friendly towns first then we can work on the not so friendly.
Maybe pick up the enclave and recapture the raptor.
Now let's do all of this while wisper keeps her desquise sickle keeps her cool
Starlight keeps her head and dusty keeps what little sanity he has left...oh and echo keeps from killing everyone.
Hmm. If Sandstorm intends to strike Serenity directly, I'd give her a day to calm down. Then I'd throw a matrix disruption grenade at her. Assuming she's a changeling: She conveniently disposed of all the grenades on targets she knew were no changelings while evading the blast herself. She turned hostile when the infiltrator outed themselves(because she liked them) and then killed them off, denying the ponies information. Which might or might not be a cheap excuse to throw Trotsen against Serenitys defenses.
Striking the downed raptor might be a good idea with this force. The ponies get to kill some changelings, Serenity gets dealt a heavy blow. And maybe the raptor can be used by the ponies again.
Well, this is troubling.
I liked the Fallout 4 references.
If anything this attack on Serenity would spread info on the changeling hive there if Whisper can convince Sand to send a few wagons to spread the news.
....phoenix....there were no alicorn snuggles........whhhhyyyy were there no snuggles?
I personally think that Sandstorm is a changeling. But that really doesn't change anything for her role in the story. It's just my thoughts.
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I think that's the impression we're supposed to have. If she is a changeling, she is an absurdly fantastic actor. And if she isn't a changeling, the changelings sure missed out. Either way, it's going to be interesting.
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In time. In due time. I hope.
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Seeing as before this incident there was only one confirmed changeling in the town, one that is unlikely to have said much to the residents if them hanging it from the front gate is any indication, one can only wonder how it is that they know the word 'changeling' in the first place. Not including the Enclave, no one other than changelings have known what a changeling is up until this point in the story. I mean, far be it from me to point the finger of suspicion at anyone, it just that that information almost certainly didn't come from nowhere.
Pfff, "background ponies"
Different megaspells always make for interesting world building
Hah. TV show style drama
Ohh. Is this whole town a Mad Max reference?
Maybe they had? Maybe they purposely sent their clumsiest idiot in there?
Hah!
Ah yes... of course some of them would have some remains of Twilight's memories.
Yup. Called it.
Echo... your Trixie is showing
Hah! Clever.
Hah. So true.
Ooh. Well put.
...she asks, moments after hitting Whisper with a spell disruption grenade specifically targeting changeling magic
Yeeeah... sometimes you just have to admit you're exactly the wrong person for the job
Then again, they definitely got her support in the whole "fight Serenity" cause, now...
Well, so far for "gathering allies"... She's going all gung-ho with just her own folks
That sounds delightfully ominous
Yup. delightfully ominous indeed
Well, this is a very rapidly escalating turn of events.
Well, this is a very rapidly escalating turn of events. Would be pretty interesting to see the reaction of suddenly all the major pony settlements in the area showing up at their doorstep armed to the teeth and full of hatred.
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Dude, you can't pick up chicks in a tank.
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you could totally pick up chicks in a tank
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Why are there six pedals when there are only four directions?
Ah, Sickle, you're charm shall forever shine brighter then the sun...or moon (s)
I have an interesting theory that I want to call now. Back when the original hive splintered, I doubt Chyrsalis (the original) would let one fellow Queen live in her hive, let alone enough to develop individual hives. But the Queens had to come from sonewhere so I'm willing to bet that normal changelings are able to metamorphisis into full-blown Queens and it will be my prediction is Whisper will find herself with a new title at the end of this story (provided this story doesnt end with bug-pony splattered across the Wasteland). The other possibility is one of the eggs will hatch as a Queen but I like the sound of Queen Whisper more :3
Yeah, thinking Sandstorm's already been replaced. You'd think if she really wanted to keep trust, she'd have used at least one of the grenades to clear herself. You know, instead of chucking them all at random noponies in the crowd, then heading off to fight a known to be superior force with a vastly outnumbered militia and no plan.
Echo, better cook up some more of those disruptions FAST.
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I'm guessing this is all a misdirection by Phoenix. I'm betting that Sandstorm is a changeling, but she hasn't been replaced. She's like Whisper, a lone changeling with no hive, but unlike Whisper, not one from hundreds of years ago with extensive training. She knows the basics of what she is, and whatever she's figured out along the way, but anything she would only learn from other changelings (like the fact that they revert when they die) is still unknown to her.
And the way she acted with the other drone was interesting. She specifically refused to use the grenade, since it would have caught her in the blast as well. But the way the questioning went only makes sense if she and the other drone weren't working together. If they were on the same side, why ask a question the other drone wouldn't be able to answer? Or even if she did, why not just say he had answered correctly no matter what he answered with? Not only that, the other drone was either an amazing actor (which we know he's not since he let his act slip as soon as Whisper walked in the door), or he played the role of a desperate infiltrator a little too well. His last look for an escape at the end before provoking her into killing him was too perfect for it to be anything other than genuine. If they were capable of improvising off each other that well, there would have been no need to let it get to that point in the first place.
Of course, I have no real evidence to support that, besides the fact that she's conspicuously avoided getting caught in any of the grenades, and the way she reacted to the other drone being exposed, so I could be wrong. But it would certainly be a neat twist if I'm right.
WelI I just finished fallout equestria and it's the most amazing story I've ever read! Xd
While kinda sad to see it end I can now read other people's stories of it now.
And the first one that came to mind is this one. Sorry about holding off on reading your story but I wanted to read the main story and learn all its more before starting this one. Now let's begin!
Lol
HO-LY FUCK!!!
They have a tank......FUCK YEAH!!!
I'm a bit concerned sandy isin't gonna wait for more allies to join before she tries to attack serenity. Rage and a broken heart will cloud ones sense of judgement. Hopefully whisper can reign her in to her senses. least we can say without a doubt that sandy is not a CHANGELING. Least I hope not.
Also........I'VE REACHED THE CURRENT CHAPTER!!! NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Oh please oh please update this AWESOME story sooooooon!!!
Amazing story bro, I love every bit of it!
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I'm glad you've enjoyed it, and it's been fun watching your comments as you made your way through it. Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away. This was the last full week of classes, so hopefully I'll have a lot more free time to get some writing done!
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Awesome dude!
Sorry if my comments are short, but I didn't want to stop reading for any length of time. Xd
Salut. désolée, je suis français. j'ai lu ta fiction avec google traducteur, et j'ai adorée, tellement que je l'ai lus en 2 jours. j'adore l’équipe qui est formée, et aussi l'alicorne qui vient de les rejoindre. j'espere que dans est guerre contre la sérénité, tout les changelin seront pas tuer. Certe, il a des combattants, mais aussi des ouvriers et des jeunes, des larves. J’espère que heroine sera les protegees de ces fous de poney, et de la Faucille.
Hello. sorry, I'm French. I read your fiction with google translator, and I loved it so much that I read it in 2 days. I love the team that is formed, and also the alicorne who just joined them. I hope that in is war against serenity, all changelin will not kill. Certainly, he has fighters, but also workers and young, larvae. I hope that heroine will be the protegees of those crazy pony, and Sickle.
Merci, en attende de la suite
Nice, I like the new raider in the crew. And I think that Sandstorm beeing a changeling is far too obvious, so I would be willing to hazard a bet that she is a shapeshifter, only of a diffrent kind that thinks changelings make a bad rep to all shapeshifters. Maybe a draconequus could be fun? Meh.
Also: THE BEAST
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I suspect that Sandstorm being a changeling opposed to Serenity would be more likely to be revealed in the aftermath of Trotsen v. Serenity than during or before, since there would be few suspicions against her. Although, it now seems plausible that we're going to see Sandstorm killed or downed during the battle, and exposed for what she is, which could cause chaos among the Trotsen ranks if Whisper and co. aren't able to prepare for that scenario.
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She might get revealed in the battle, but I don't think she'll get killed and revealed that way. Phoenix has already played that card, and played it very well. It wouldn't have the same impact on the readers the second time around.
My guess is that Whisper will figure out what she is at some point but not confront her about it, since a spy who doesn't know they've been caught is far more valuable than one in handcuffs (or dead). Which will, naturally, cause some sort of misunderstanding shenanigans.
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Those were ferals.
I meant intelligent ones.
Whoop.
All caught up in a week.
Now to wait chapter to chapter.
😃😃
When next AWESOME update?
Hopefully this story doesn't flounder and remain "incomplete".