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Welp, time to disappear for a couple months and leave that dangling
Actually, classes are wrapping up, with finals in just two weeks, and I've been finding the classes pretty easy. The next chapter is almost done, and once finals are over, I'll have lots more free-time to write.
Well, bleeeep.
Now that, that is an ending note. Wow. and Ow! Okay, pray someone has a good charm and charisma here.. If not, good luck knowing folks.
Still, loving the lead up here, and heh. Hooves down, great disarm too.
8199583 Don't you dare. I've been wanting more information on the alicorn since she took out that first group of raiders.
Let me also add that this is the third time you've updated within 3 hours of me updating my e-reader... I seem to permanently be 1 chapter behind.
Sickle is a weapon in and of herself. The Alicorn is a bigger weapon, wielding smaller weapons.
This can go one of two ways.
A: They all die and the story ends, which, while disappointing would be a hilarious break from how situations like this normally go.
B: The Alicorn is non-hostile and wants something from them
Something to note is that it's never been specified whether the Alicorn shows as hostile or not.
Oh, come on! Will Whisper ever catch a break? At the very least, let's hope this alicorn isn't a bitch. Or if she is, let's hope the next facility has a living changeing.
If Whisper is, in fact, the last living member of her hive, what does that mean for her hive? Is it dead forever? Are changeling infiltrators able to take the place of a queen if they are all that's left? Would Whisper even make that decision on the off chance she could, given how loveless and the wasteland is?
... OH SHIT!!!! Everyone is Boned. Unless the alicorn is friendly, then they have another 'possible' companion YAY!
Finally, the long-awaited encounter.
Can't say what will happen, but I have a really good feeling about this!
Poor Whisper can't catch a break
Oh shet. Alicorn ambush.
You though this would be an uneventful chapter, right? No cliffhanger that keep you hooked up like a cocaine yonki, right?
think again
I still think the alicorn was guarding them and is extremely curious abaut Whisper as it has a mania for healing and reanimation, possibly caused by his remaining pre-godess memories or medical autorun.exe. Chill.
Why so serious?
Well I suppose we will finally learn what the mysterious stalker's motivations are BUT ONLY ONCE THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES OUT!
Another brilliant chapter and finally it looks like the alicorn will reveal itself. This story never gets boring.
Wish you good luck with your finals.
That cliffhanger though.
First Contact...nevr fun, but always nessisary
8199583 Yes! I can't wait to see what happens next. My theory is that the Alicorn has been trying to talk to them and this is how she figured out how. Being split from from Alicorn conscious probably has made some severe metal issues but, she can fit right in with Sickle. I personally hope she becomes a permanent memember. I think it would be really interesting.
Hello there, maybe-Twilight.
Should be PipBucks.
And you and your fuckin cliffhangers!
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D'oh
Also sorry not sorry
Jesus the Alicorn is here! Can't wait for more!
................"YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS!!!!!!
I cannot wait for the next chapter, you cliffhanging fiend!
Finally caught up...
So... I think this is the point where there is only one thing to do... “Hi Ms Purple Alicorn! Lovely day, isn’t it?”
havent started reading yet id like to know how many chapters are you expecting to have roughly
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Hard to say precisely, but I would guess somewhere in the neighborhood of 45.
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so its mostly done and im guessing you are close to having a new chapter out?
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Yep. New chapter every 2-3 weeks. Now that classes are done for the summer, that should start being a bit quicker. Next chapter should be up this coming Monday, and I'm hoping to keep up a quick and steady pace through most of the summer.
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nice i will most certainly start reading although i dont know if it will be before i finish catching up to dairies of a mad man or after either way its on my to-read list
Finally got the time to read this and I must say that you have written yet another great chapter. Even though not much happened, I still enjoy the character development in these scenarios. That cliffhanger though...
Please tell me I'm not the only one who remembers this...
Some people get mad at the author for this sort of cliffhanger, but me? I blame this entirely on commenters. "Wow, they really seem interested in this alicorn. Guess this is the right place to stop." That's the right thought process as a writer.
That makes this your fault, commenters. You have only yourselves to blame.
I mean, I never said anything, so I get to be mad. But the rest of you, stew in your shame.
Do you already have a date when the next chapter will be finished? Can't wait for it to continue.
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Why as a matter of fact...
Holy shit. Just like that? Just done in two shots.
that's badass.
Fucking bawler. [Insert awesome empji here]
Huh. Inhabited? Or just infested?
Hah. Except it's a shelter designed for long-term survival. They'd just start digging...
Oh...kay. That's interesting
Awwright! At least they can keep the car running
Oh no...
Dun dun dunnnnn!
Wait, it's that gorram alicorn again, isn't it?
Hah. Called it.
> I couldn’t help but note just how many hiding places there was
"how many hiding places there [were]"
Alicorn confrontation. Bout time! Lol
The time has come!
I thought he was going to betray them right there or it was a dopple ganger
Huh, I feel like it was mentioned somewhere that the PipBucks wouldn't pick up small animals like that since if it tried to track such things would it overload the user with data. Sure, it is a radrat and bigger than a normal rat since that is how radiation works, but would it not be too small to be picked up still?
Nitpick:
"and started the fight on our terms.." The terms of the double period?
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I don't think it was ever specified... but Pip obviously wasn't getting spammed with contact marks for flies or worms, so there's presumably some threshold. That said, parasprites showed up on E.F.S., so creatures don't have to be too big to be picked up.
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Birds, Rats and R.U.S. show up all through the games as valid enemies, and radroaches aren't really that much bigger. I'd say rats are just about on the threshold.