Seventy-five years have past since the war ended, and ponykind clings to what little order there still is. Two years ago, for a pony known as the Bloody Angel has brought terror into the wasteland. Now, my father's past has made me a target.
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is that supposed to be black jack? and im not gonna read this im sorry it just sounds awful the description looks like a 12 year old story and why so many post deletes can you not deal with criticism? you cant get better if you dont know what ur doing wrong
8185443 1) I'm fairly certain Blackjack doesn't have black hair and tan fur. Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't her main red and black with a white coat?
2) I find it hard that you can't take my story seriously for having slightly lower quality grammar when you can for another person that commented on your page which, according to you, also had some grammar problems. Your one to talk since I've seen multiple simple mistakes grammar wise in you comment.
3) I don't mind criticism, but I do mind jerks who would rather bash on a story just because it's "Fallout Equestria". Sure, maybe I shouldn't have deleted them but I haven't done that in a long time.
Also, if you want to call my story '12 year old writing' I would like to see what you can do and compare afterwards. It be hypocritical to call someone else work bad when you write just as well as I do.
Edit: Given by your favorites library, you look at a lot of big name authors on this site. Remember that not every story is going to have that same level of quality regardless of the amount of views, and that even the highest ranked stories make mistakes. Don't judge my story just because I have low views, which I'm sure you are, okay?
8185799 fuck me ill sent the reply in a privet msg