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Why is this rated M?
8184626 Based on Fimfiction's standard for the mature rating:
As "extreme violence" is par for the course in Fallout: Equestria content and present in the story, the mature rating is applied.
All caught up! Gotta say, I really enjoyed what I've read. Despite being a bit wary of Comet at the beginning, I've come to like her as a character and even sympathize with her. She strikes me as someone who, deep beneath all the deceit, bravado, and smooth-talking, is really quite lonely. I hope things will eventually work out for her... and that she might make an actual friend by the conclusion as well ;)
Your humor is top-notch and the "corporate raider" concept is unique and utilized well. Bravo on the work you've completed, and I'm excited to follow along whenever you continue!
Welp, that was a surprisingly short, and a surprisingly weird chapter, and a really really bad place to give a cliffhanger and not update on the story! For the love of god and all there are holy, please go back to writing so we can figure out what the hell the backstory of Comet is!
Nitpick:
" There’d need to be something that keeps them everyone in line.”" Either or, not both.
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I've been getting back to work on the next chapter actually. Part of the long wait was reconfiguring the overarching story and characters. Your feedback is welcome encouragement!
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I do only have one Thing to say to that... Yush!
Great read! Looking forward to more chapters!!