FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Aaaaaand Caved. XD
Cocoa wasn't able to resist Glitter's adorableness...
And now i see so much the trade version of the "Good Cop, Bad Cop" style between Glitter and Charity... XD
And damn this goop is so fucked up... and if it has this effect, the freed slaves need to be observed medically, and ensured to have the this fucking horror that is the fluffy batter to be expunged from their systems. Letting them out everywhere in town would not be prudent.
Hmm, a cold blooded killer unleashes their wrath upon the slavers, and bypasses the slaves. Almost makes me think Fast is sleep Shrouding.
8111645 Must be the real Shrould...
8111645 What do you mean "almost"
This was in the previous chapter
Considering the violence that was visited upon these slavers and the obvious fear their leader expirenced before he killed himself, I think we can assume that this was the work of a full powered Shroud and the only one who heard what the "Princess said was Fast.
And that last bit about "returning to his princess in a flash of black lightning" kinda adds credibility to the theory of Fast being the Shroud (and sleep killing) since he has teleported and his teleporting is tinged with lightning, there is also this part in the beginning of this chapter
And that he clearly describes himself as being very tired when he woke up
So i was rereading the story when suddenly a crazy thought appeared in my head:
"Mobius helped Luna figure out a way to slowly heal/fix the original Shroud"
8123422 If your theory is true, and Fast=Shroud is also true, and the Sleepshrouding theory is also true, it means that first : the purification process was not supposed to be 200 years long, but the mega-spells happened, and with Fast's cryo-sleep, it was really slowed down.
Second : The Wastelands, combined with his ascension are slowly unmaking all progress made. And despite all of Fast's Willpower (this guy merit a Green Lantern seriously) he's slowly losing the battle against the Corruption...
Third : When he'll be aware of the true nature of his Darkness, he'll need to get to Mobius, ASAP. He surely have part of the key to save him. I feel that also another piece of the puzzle is inside the Sealed room in the Castle.
Fourth : I have another theory is that he reject so much his Shroud side and the darkest sides of his personality, that he's creating his own dark nemesis. Aaaaand now i imagine a Persona 4-like boss battle to make him finally accept his dark side and find a balance... XD
sorry for the tangent, but i'm a sucker for the Persona license, it's basically a crossover MLP/Jojo's Bizarre Adventures when you think about it. Seriously ! Personas are to simplify in an extreme way, Stands that are fueled by Friendship !
In my spoilered zone i also made a passing joke about Fast's Willpower and the Green Lanterns, but you know ? I thought about it more seriously, and damn, he would do a damn fine Yellow Lantern (Fear), in the Goddamn Batman kind of way. Let me explain. In my exploration of internet, i came to encounter an interesting tidbit about DC comics, and that in an AU (i think, don't remember totally but good chances AU) comic, Batman became a Yellow lantern, because he was striking so much fear in the heart of the Criminal World that he became the Incarnation of the Criminal Fear.
Fast, when he don't go killing all his enemies, and his most merciful side shines, is doing the same thing : giving the survivors the Fear of Luna to make them behave. And damn, the more he does that, the more i think he will strike fear among them. Yeah, he's also becoming an avatar of fear for the wicked.
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First: Yeah that is pretty much what i am thinking, and then he went out into the Wasteland, found another piece of his soul and started to encounter "bad" ponies as well as a "Princess"
Second: Yeah... and Virescent messing around with that mental stasis pod probably did not help (and yes he does defintly merit a Green lantern ring, if only for resisting Jade's new hobby of teasing him, not to mention every other mare who finds it fun to tease the poor guy)
Third: Another piece of the puzzle and/or another piece of his soul. A larger piece that has not gone through the purification process due to still being stuck in the castle.
Fourth: "I am thou, and thou art I". It would definiftly be interesting.
8128389 I realized I left that a hanging thread and eventually address it, tempted to retcon it later and fix it in editing, just count it as a flub for now. I do remember in a few chapters and acknowledge it.
Shame they didn't have time to check out Vault 75, but saving the slaves comes first I suppose. Great job either way!
Glitter negotiating is the best. Seeing Cocoa deflate and get played after so much smooth talking last chapter was great. Seeing Jade and Fast step in to bring the negotiation back to the original point of alliance and friendship was great. That scene was awesome and everyome involved got to be their best, including Cocoa.
Shout out to Fast for being mostly tame this chapter. Outside of the Cocoa stepping out of the shower, he didn't check out anyone at all when it wasn't called for. He wasn't tempted. He was almost normal, sex-wise. It was nice to read him almost like he was pre-alicorn potion.
That's a neet toy keep your soldiers fed forever and if they die on the Frontline they will keep on killing I need some of that batter
Next thing know, she’s going to be ordering pickles and ice cream! (Yes, it’s a stupid joke, but why has no one used it?)
That aside, the negotiations between Glitter and Cocoa actually got pretty intense. It seems like Glitter’s fatal flaw in negotiations is desserts, a 90% discount is a bit too much for dessert products.
I think she's preeeegnaaaaant!!!!
I'd be scared.
Wow...
I didn't like Cocoa Latte when Fast first met her. But now feel bad for her.
Hey dashie I will admit that I have stagnated on rereading due to another story I'm reading that is currently being updated. Also the fuck you with the ( in the nicest way possible) shit made me laugh I look back at it it still makes me laugh thanks for that little nugget of happiness
Hilarious
Wow Fast is high as a kite